posted 11-11-2005 04:50 PM
Y do pplz think shes 2 headed?!?!?! Well, she kinda does look like it. Sry its not clear, I dont have a scanner, so i had 2 take it with my digital cam.Anywayz, plz tell me wat u think! ^_^ Yeah, i no it sucks, but a little motivation couldn't hurt!....much.
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Philip Ward
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posted 22-11-2005 08:02 PM
it's good, original, but u need to work on planning stages instead of diving in with both feet
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Bomu
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posted 23-11-2005 03:09 PM
Good stuff kazekokoro. The proportions are generally pretty good, as is the face.
It woulda been cool to consider the background a little more. Rather than rushing in a few clouds and a rock for the sake if it, maybe consider other landscapoe features such as buildings, structures, trees, mountains and hills etc. Check out "landscapes" on google for ideas and reference. Although it's still a work in progress, try using a fine-line pen rather than a blue ballpoint to ink otherwise your work will look amaterirsh.
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kazekokoro
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posted 25-11-2005 04:07 AM
Thx, both of ya!!! I want a scanner sooo bad so I can clean this up, make a background, and cg. U guys r sugoi!!
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kazekokoro
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posted 25-11-2005 04:17 AM
Thx 2 advice I really appreciate it! I posted again 2 say happy thanxgiving!
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Tri_kento
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posted 25-11-2005 06:11 AM
nice drawing, I like it, tho I find useing a pen isn't the best tool in the shed, if u catch what i mean. But i spos some times u gotta make due. ummm U might wanna work on the clouthing folds on the arms, they look a little twizer like.
but over all nice drawing, and u have a good digi cam to get that i high of a picture, what is it a 5 mega pixel?
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posted 25-11-2005 06:31 PM
Umm... I lost the cam ( for the 18th time!!!) so I can't really tell u right now. Thx 4 the comment, and when *cough* if *cough* I find it again, I'll tell u.
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kazekokoro
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posted 30-11-2005 02:45 AM
Actually, its only 3.5 pega pixels.
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Nitro
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posted 30-11-2005 10:16 AM
this pic is really nice. you've used a lot of folds in the clothes which is good, (unlike me... ) but you need to work a bit more on your faces.
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