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TK
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Member # 370

posted 20-11-2005 07:47 PM

There hasn't been any traditional manga artwork on here lately so im putting up this half done one of mine in the hope that others will start doing the same!

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<Judouka>
Newbie

posted 21-11-2005 06:10 AM

Yo! Real good cging but work on porportions everything else is good!

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NZ Matt
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Member # 354

posted 21-11-2005 06:39 AM

sweet peice good to see some trad. stuff coming in.

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 21-11-2005 08:35 AM

yea u really need to work on the body more like me...

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 23-11-2005 07:30 PM

Looks pretty good overall. Nice style

by shrinking the head, making the legs longer and re-working her right hand (can't work out what's going on there), the work could be vastly improved. If anything, take on board my poaints for your next pic..

Why do you refer to it as 'traditional' btw? Looks like it's still be coloured using digital media?

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Philip Ward
Newbie

posted 23-11-2005 07:33 PM

it's good, i can't really think of anything to "nag" u about jsut that keep practicing

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TK
Grand Member

Member # 370

posted 26-11-2005 08:27 PM

thanks guys

i didnt even spot where her hand was i laughed my head off when i realised what it looked like!

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Nitro
Grand Member

Member # 368

posted 30-11-2005 10:25 AM

very nice! i love the hair and she has beautiful eyes.

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Anime angel
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Member # 385

posted 01-12-2005 07:31 PM

The is so wild and cool and i like the colour of the eyes aswell.

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schoolgirl sassami
Mega Member

Member # 386

posted 01-12-2005 07:33 PM

woah cool i wish i could draw like this i'm only good at drawing maels keep up the good work

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TK
Grand Member

Member # 370

posted 01-12-2005 08:51 PM

thanks guys im doing manga for my A2 art coursework so my latest drawings leave that one in the dust because ive had to spend alot of time on them ill post them up when my new scanner arrives

i jus realised i never answered bomus question what i mean by traditional is if you look at your stuff its classic with the big eyes and the animated looking hair where as when you look at jats stuff its like looking at a photograph so i guess i mean more cartoony manga

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