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Philip Ward
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posted 29-12-2005 11:30 PM

heres the start of my 1st comic, tell me what u guys think and maybe i may have use for this story http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y295/Akuro_Desamon/File0003.jpg http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y295/Akuro_Desamon/File0003.jpg[/URL] http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y295/Akuro_Desamon/02.jpg

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Nitro
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posted 30-12-2005 08:44 AM

its good. it could turn into a very interesting story but I think your sound effects need some work. at this point they're plain, as if someone is just saying them. they need to jump at you like BANG, CRASH, BOOM!

nice work! (and trust me, dont let anyone discourage you when you're writing comics...it makes alot harder to work, im speaking from personal experiance)

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"Oh my sweet revenge. Will be yours for the taking.
It's in the making, baby. a-a-a-a-h." -Revenga, System Of A Down

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Philip Ward
Newbie

posted 30-12-2005 11:24 AM

i'll keep that in mind, heh i need to get a big black pen to colour in Akuro on the "bullet stop" pic

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Nitro
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posted 30-12-2005 11:32 AM

just dont use a permenant marker cos the ink will look different

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"Oh my sweet revenge. Will be yours for the taking.
It's in the making, baby. a-a-a-a-h." -Revenga, System Of A Down

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