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Nitro
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posted 30-05-2006 11:30 AM     Profile for Nitro   Author's Homepage   Email Nitro     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I drew the original concept drawing of this guy late last year/early this year (can't remember). The original is actually a pic of him standing on the side wearing a trenchcoat, holding a staff and looking very much like an X-Man, but I haven't scanned it because it's on A3 and I don't know how I'd scan it.

This is picture is just a lil work of his face and a concept colour scheme. I drew his face a lil squashed (okay, a lot)and I think the glasses could be worked on... but enjoy! And please give me your thoughts and suggestions.



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Timmy
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posted 17-07-2006 10:56 PM     Profile for Timmy   Email Timmy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
-the face dosent look right
-you may want ot have bigger ear rings becuase drawing him(im guessing) at a distance
would be hard to put such small earings on i mean he's right up close and the ear rings are just lines

[ 17-07-2006: Message edited by: Timmy ]

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Nitro
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posted 19-07-2006 07:50 AM     Profile for Nitro   Author's Homepage   Email Nitro     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
thanks for the comments dude.

just to add though, the original was in an A3 book, I'll stick in a photo of it one day, so you can see that the orignal is a bit different.

Yeah, I know, his faced is squashed as.

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Tri_kento
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posted 20-07-2006 06:03 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
mmm neat idea, i've always liked the X-Men, and the one with a trench coat and staff would be Gambit.

But now for a little crits:

The angle of the head is really strange, u have this side view of the face, yet how are we able to see the full lens of his glasses?, also if u look at his hair, the part in his hair starts just above his right eyebrow, this gives it a very odd look. U might also wanna make the top part of his head bigger, so not to give off the monkey ape look in his jaw.

(don't take these crits as attacks, just words of wisdome to help ya out).

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