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Nitro
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posted 30-05-2006 11:35 AM     Profile for Nitro   Author's Homepage   Email Nitro     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This is a little sketch I whipped up in about 30 minutes.
I know the hands look horrible but it was difficult working off a small pic and also I am pretty crap at drawing hands. Gambit's lips look a bit weird so I tried to cover them up with the girl's hair. But on the whole I think the picture turned out reasonbly well.
Please tell me what you think! ^_^



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evilone
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posted 30-05-2006 08:47 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
than it should be in the doodles thread

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Nitro
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posted 08-06-2006 11:26 AM     Profile for Nitro   Author's Homepage   Email Nitro     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
uh...

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Bugsy
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posted 08-06-2006 03:45 PM     Profile for Bugsy   Author's Homepage   Email Bugsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
No it shouldn't, no one expects feedback in the doodles thread Nonetheless, it would be better in the works in progress forum.
Anyway, the picture looks good. A couple remarks tho, mainly in the shapes of their head. In both cases, it looks a bit slanted on the back. Shape it out more, especially since the hair looks like it could me more volumous (esp in Rogue's case. Is it rogue? I'm not exactly a Marvel fan, hehe).
About the eyes, it almost looks as if Gambit's eye isopen but doesn't have an iris; the eyebrow looks a bit like some anime's eyelashes. Perhaps make them thicker, hairier looking, and in a bit different orientation (noone's eyebrow droop down below someone's eyes).
All in all, good work tho.

EDIT: topic moved to Works in Progress

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Nitro
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posted 10-06-2006 05:20 AM     Profile for Nitro   Author's Homepage   Email Nitro     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
About the eyes, it almost looks as if Gambit's eye isopen but doesn't have an iris; the eyebrow looks a bit like some anime's eyelashes.

Actually I didn't draw him with eybrows, (as I said I drew this from another pic.) cos he didn't have any in the pic. The line above the eye I think was supposed to be a crease, but then again I wasn't really thinking too much about the details of the pic because it was just a quick sketch.

Here's the original pic.

Mine isn't quite the same, it was more of an exercise for me.

I do agree I could change the heads a bit.

Anyways, thanks for the comments and suggestions! and btw, I'm not sure who the girl is. I do know that Rogue and Gambit were going out for a while in the comics but that's not Rogue.

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