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slick_skizzik
Newbie

Member # 44

posted 29-04-2002 10:51 PM

Hi.
I'm new to this board and want opinions about this pic. Comment and Critique (CNC) if you please.

If that doesnt work, try here.

"The sun? That's the hottest place on earth!"[

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 30-04-2002 08:52 AM

Hey slick, I'm afraid the pic's not working for me, neither is the link- even when I delete that extra / (after .com)

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Organic Metal

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 30-04-2002 09:06 AM

same here.

but I give you a nice wellcome onboard the board.

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Bugsy
Moderator

Member # 9

posted 30-04-2002 01:25 PM

Strangely it works for me

The line-art is very nice, good outfit ^^; There's a few things I'd like to say about the cg however. It looks like you only shaded the skin, don't be afraid to use large surfaces to shade the clothing. For the skin, use a bit more contrast ^^; Finally, the background looks like a Cloud filter with an additional Difference Cloud filter to me. Try to be a little more creative for the background, something that doesn't show the "filterness" as much, or maybe a real environment. It'll make the pic so much more interesting ^_^
Maybe alot of c&c, I still like the drawing, tho

Welcome to the board!

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Desert Rain

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slick_skizzik
Newbie

Member # 44

posted 30-04-2002 02:52 PM

The link's not working? Well that's tripod for you. Try copying this and paste it as the URL http://strike_b1g.tripod.com//sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/zipaway-dress.jpg

That should work.

"The sun? That's the hottest place on earth!"

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rutteger
Newbie

posted 30-04-2002 03:38 PM

Hmmm... Your style is similar to my brother's so I can give give you some advice. Her right, (our left) hand is flat and unshaded. Maybe you were unsure as to how to shade it? Try shading it like you did with the other hand.

As for the clothing design, nice idea! A zip-off dress that changes into a short skirt is somthing I wish my girlfriend could get into But it, too, seems kinda flat. Particularily the lower half. Try checkin out www.polykarbon.com for ideas on shading clothes and folds. That should help.

SHIN-SHORYUKEN!!!

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 01-05-2002 03:07 AM

Couldn't get your pic to work Slick even when I pasted that other link. I keep gettting sent to the following page:
http://strike_b1g.tripod.com/adm/interstitial/remote.jpg

Welcome to the board tho

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Final Fantasy

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Ayzie
Grand Member

Member # 25

posted 02-05-2002 07:58 AM

Hi!! I really like it, but that background just doesn't do it. It's too distracting and doesn't fit the character. The character itself is cool tho!

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 06-05-2002 12:03 AM

To rutteger and slick_skizzik, out of curiosity, how come you're using each other's email address'? I thought it was weird that rutteger was answering this, since he's got the same details (and even the same password) as Slick. Same person? Enlighten me.

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Organic Metal

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CoolOtaku
Member

Member # 48

posted 06-05-2002 02:40 AM

It's a cool pic but they're right about it seeming a little flat. A bit more shading and lightening and it would be great!

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slick_skizzik
Newbie

Member # 44

posted 31-05-2002 12:50 AM

OK here's the story behind myseelf and my younger brother.

A few months ago my parents got divorced. Me being of age decided to live on my own. My younger brother left with my mom. We both share the same e-mail adress because at the time my mom didn't trust what my brother was doing on-line.
Oh and to rutteger: HOWZITGOIN?

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 31-05-2002 09:40 AM

Ok get it slick_skizzik. Just can't see why rutteger is using: slick_skizzik@hotmail.com and you're using: rutteger@newmail.com

How old's your younger brother, slick?

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Organic Metal

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