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Jackel
Grand Member

Member # 47

posted 18-05-2002 04:46 AM

This is my latest "masterpiece"..... phhiissss yea right.
http://public.fotki.com/jackel014/artwork/tess_2.html

After looking at it I realized I might have misplaced a few of the facial features a little bit.

I'm kinda proud of the hair 'cause I don't think I've ever done hair that way before.

Whatca' all think!??

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 18-05-2002 05:34 AM

hey Jackel nice sketch. Just a few points. It could do with some shading especially in the middle of the face. Looks a bit bland there. The hair is cool, but i was wondering - does she have that little hair or is it tied back and outta site?

The rest looks great - keep it up.

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Jackel
Grand Member

Member # 47

posted 18-05-2002 05:52 AM

Thanks AKATT!!

Her hairs tied behind her head.

Yeh, I'm gonna try to do some shading on her face, but I just posted this one first, 'cause I'm not entirely sure I wanna shade her face 'cause I'm afraid I might ruin it. Maybe I'll just do it really light.

thanks for the crit!

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 19-05-2002 12:56 AM

ho realy great stuff as always Jackel
and the hair is quite cool too.

but somehow my brain tells me that her nose is to small and low maybe it's because everything in her face is so big ?

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 19-05-2002 01:46 PM

nice work! Agreeing with Giam, the nose looks too small. In realism the width of the nose should be as wide as the width of an eye, with the eyes starting at the edges of the nose (if that makes sense). So make the nose a little bigger and the eyes a little smaller

And that hair kicks ass *_*

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 19-05-2002 05:26 PM

Yeah, I think bugsy's right about thew eyes - make em a little bit smaller and I think they'll be more in proportion with the rest of the face. Also, maybe not filling in the iris with black will make it looks little more realistic?
Really like those lose hair details you've drawn down the side of her face, don't change those

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