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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 31-05-2002 01:31 PM

well uhm what the title said.
I would say a colored drawing wrapped in a some design style hehe.

1024x768 - 270kb - PNG

so what do you think top/flop

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Bugsy
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posted 31-05-2002 03:22 PM

Cool pic, I like the cel style

My critiques would be that the nose is a bit big, and the edges of the trousers look a bit thick. Otherwise good job ^_^

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Desert Rain

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AKATT
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posted 01-06-2002 11:08 PM

cool pic GiAm. i really like the top and bottom bars. they look fantastic. agree with the big nose being a problem.

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 02-06-2002 05:25 PM

Hehe the nose is actully more or less part of my style (but it shrinks and is falling in place since I first draw it).

Personaly I dont like how the Minidisc remote turned out (should have worked more on the details). but otherwise everything turned nearly the way out as I planned it.

oh and I can see what you mean with the trousers (I keep it in mind for the next drawing ).

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Bomu
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posted 02-06-2002 08:07 PM

Looks v. nice - good bit of design meets char art, and both elelmets go well together.

Main problem me thinks is with the hand and wrist. The hand look too small and also I think the wrist needs to bend. As you've drawn it, the elbow is comming towards us, so when it bends towards the head, the hand and forearm should create a 'r' shape, so the full palm of the hand is resting on the head/over the ear phones. Sorry, does that make any sence?

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Organic Metal

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 19-06-2002 10:39 AM

Ah sorry forgot to answer again.
Yup but I understand what you mean Bomu.
I had planned to do it the way you say'd in the first place, but after eight redraw's of the hand I gave up.

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Bomu
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posted 19-06-2002 01:34 PM

Wow- someone understands my flawed English and spelling - it's a miracle, praise the lord!

Fair enough then I give ya marks for effort. Anything other than a boring, standing front view pose takes more effort and skill and it's cool to see you're giving it a go. Maybe post earier works in progress (sorry, you might have done that for this one, I can't remember ) and it could be corrected at an earier stage?

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 20-06-2002 09:34 PM

na i didnt post anything before hand (except in the progress have you made any tread)
but I try to remember posting before I give up with a problem next time.

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