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Jackel
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posted 14-06-2002 06:30 AM     Profile for Jackel   Author's Homepage   Email Jackel     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
OMG, it's the last week of classes for me and I am SO bored during class......but I get to draw all day in class so it's not that bad.
Here's something I finished a couple of days ago.
http://public.fotki.com/jackel014/artwork/honey_drop.html

I think HER left hand may be a little small and the length of the arms don't seem to match........or maybe they do.....not quite sure.

Whatcha' all think?

heheheh "whatcha' all think" HAHAHA!

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Bomu
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posted 14-06-2002 11:18 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey that's great Jackel. Possible the best pic I've seen you do! I can see the left hand is a lot smaller than the right s I think you've effectively managed to critque yourself on this one! I wouldn't really change anything else

keep it up

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Intergalactic_del
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posted 15-06-2002 02:41 AM     Profile for Intergalactic_del   Email Intergalactic_del     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hmm
the head looks a lil funny to me but thats all

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AKATT
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posted 17-06-2002 04:07 PM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
nice sketch Jackel. i'd only say that the way the head is attached to the neck looks a bit weird. Maybe the neck is attached to far back r maybe it isn't thick enough? anyway other than that the pic looks great.

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Jackel
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posted 18-06-2002 12:42 AM     Profile for Jackel   Author's Homepage   Email Jackel     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey cool, thanks for all the comments and crits!
Yeah I think her neck is attached to far to the back of her head. Thanks for picking that up
I could always thicken the neck instead I guess, but it isn't really my style. I like doing the thin necks.

Thanks for all the comments and stuff everyone!!!

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