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KDM
Junior Member

Member # 49

posted 02-07-2002 02:39 PM

for ShinraOnline's monthly contest. I couldnt think of who to draw so i ended up doing Reno cause he sexy!

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the metalman
Grand Member

Member # 42

posted 02-07-2002 07:13 PM

kool stuff
but i think his hand needs more colorin detail...cuz looks fake

like uhhh put some indication of nukles[howeva u spell it]

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 03-07-2002 10:22 PM

i dunno if i'll bother replying to your posts KDM. There doesn't seem much to critic about - ever. Tho i do agree with the man of Metal. It's Knuckles btw

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KDM
Junior Member

Member # 49

posted 04-07-2002 06:10 AM

BAH! please reply...i'd like to know that i did good as well as bad

such a gay ass pose

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Random_Task
Grand Member

Member # 30

posted 04-07-2002 07:56 AM

the background is pretty sick but maybe you need to adjust the saturation of the blues and reds so that the colours match the background more.

maybe some secondary highlights as a result of the background, reflecting onto his\her jacket (don't know the character so i think i'll cover my ass by putting guy or girl)

*random_task slaps self with a large trout*

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 04-07-2002 08:26 AM

Uhm lets see, the thing I would change the most would be the saturation on his jacket.

The pose is very nice but somehow his lower arm looks somehow flat to me (dunno why).

The BG suites the pic very well I would flip it tho to have the dark part behind the cicarette (so the smoke is more visibly).

overall a great work and I like the shading of the folds on his shirt.

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 04-07-2002 07:50 PM

Looks great, but could still use a little work on making guys look more masculin. I thought you did a lot better for this one, but untill everyone's conviced he is a 'He' and not a 'she', I think you'll still have to work on it

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darkw00ds
Newbie

Member # 82

posted 11-08-2002 10:32 AM

I think it looks real good.. I mean,, your line work is excellent how do you get your lines like that? Tell me please. AIM: darkw00dz

The only problem I see is the arms look a little too long.. or olded incorectly.. but I mean that's some effort I see put into that there picture.. yeah..

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 11-08-2002 01:46 PM

good work
i think everything else has been said

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Jay
Newbie

Member # 374

posted 09-03-2006 02:47 PM

Wow very nice
Well as for making him look more masculine i dont think its really needed

the guys in ff7 (excluding barrat) look a bit umm well they arnt screaming body builder. lol
and the arm does look a bit flat, i think its because you didnt give much thought to the rendering

you have given the entire forearm the same shading around the outer edges, i think if you shaded in the lower half of the arm or w/e is right going by your lightsource the arm will look right

**i love the pose by the way ^_^

Edit : forgot to mention, the shape of the face seems a little wrong, it hasnt got any definition to it, its just a direct line from forehead to jaw, so perhaps a curve around the eye/nose area where the face line dissapears from viewers sight?

[ 09-03-2006: Message edited by: Jay ]

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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 09-03-2006 03:06 PM

The lineart seems pretty good, though it could be improved with some line width variation. Im not totally convinced by the colouring however. the general idea is correct, but I think there should be more differentiation in hue from the lows-mids-darks. and also they are over saturated as has already been said. It could also be improved with a secondary light source of some kind.

Pretty good job though. look forward to seeing more

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evilone
Extreme Member

Member # 347

posted 09-03-2006 05:49 PM

um GUYS! this pic was made in 2002 and the person who made it is long gone from this site so please,
stop digging up old posts ya goldiggers!!!

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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 10-03-2006 10:29 AM

lol oops

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