will be keeping an eye on this page to see the later developments. not much to comment on since there's only 2 pages! and we don't know the characters that much.

how long did that take you btw?

first off what bugs me the most is the beer pack.
In the first strip the perspective is completly messed up.
Maybe find some books about the subject it could greatly Improve your drawings with this, use a ruler when it comes to straight objects.

Another thing is the text use some comic fonts, instead of the standart text font you use now.

you can get free comic fonts here Blambot

Uhm while your writing and jokes arent that bad, I would say maybe spend a extra hour to polish them.

ok enough hope it wasn't to harsh and it helps you to improve.

I will look forward to your next strip.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Anyway.. pretty nice.. even though the Jesus joke offended me..

And why were they naked all of a sudden?

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-God bless

ummmm it's supposed to offend people who are religious, and thanks for the tip i'll run out to the store and buy a book on how to draw beer boxes...