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Shilva
Newbie

posted 07-09-2002 02:07 AM

This is Cloud of ff7
please give me feedbacks so I can do
better next time.
http://www.geocities.com/fantasywind2002/picture1.html

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 07-09-2002 11:49 PM

final fantasy VII fan *thumbs up*

i'd say the jaw is a little to angular and needs to curve a little. The colours need to be more in contrast. Basically the shadows need to be darker.

otherwise i like and hope to see more of your stuff.

welcome to OM btw

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 09-09-2002 11:46 PM

Hm AKATT said the most stuff allready, but I would say that the neck seems a bit long. otherwise it is a nice work.

oh and wellcome to the board.

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 10-09-2002 01:45 AM

well it s all been said
welcome

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Shilva
Newbie

posted 29-09-2002 07:14 AM

I just finish another drawing with Cloud
in different style.
http://www.geocities.com/fantasywind2002/picture2.html

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 02-10-2002 12:07 AM

looks quite good actualy.
the bike looks pretty good and cloud looks overall ok too (maybe his legs seems abit long for his torso,arms, head).

main concern however is the composition cloud is way too small in comparsion to the bike he looks like a child (or dwarf) with it.

also take into acount that he is standing infront of the bike and because of that he should be even a bit bigger than usual.

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