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darkw00ds
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Member # 82

posted 02-10-2002 06:09 AM

http://ppoison.tripod.com/calebsmoke.jpg

C&C please

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Pyro X
Grand Member

Member # 94

posted 02-10-2002 06:26 AM

hey dark the pic is pretty cool but whats with the hand with blood or is it paint

oh and the hand with the bud, the finger with the smoke around it looks like its cut off.

but overall i like it

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SongSiuHua
Grand Member

Member # 90

posted 02-10-2002 06:36 AM

Mmmmm now with more nico-glycerol!!
But seriously cool pic kinda Mcfarlany- well back when he drew!

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FunkyC
Member

Member # 92

posted 04-10-2002 01:19 AM

Ooooh now this I like...not sure whats going on...but I like it ^__^

See kids? This is why you shouldnt smoke
Seriously though, I like your line work style, and the cg is pretty nice. I dunno, I've always liked that 'heavy line/shadow' style.....meh Im rambing again, sorry

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kaori shima
Grand Member

Member # 98

posted 04-10-2002 02:42 AM

i like it! dark picture ^.^; think i saw someone like that at college

my only advise right now would be *and i get told this often* is to make sure your sleeves relatively have the same amount of wrinkles

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darkw00ds
Newbie

Member # 82

posted 04-10-2002 06:49 AM

Thanks for the comments. much appreciated.

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 05-10-2002 02:52 PM

ah fresh victims for the evercrowing army of the undead

he he good old caleb

Looks good to me overall.
Only critics I have is the hand in front.
It looks like he is missing a thumb (I know most of it is hidden by the hand but would look better if it is partly visible).

And I think that the wood needs alot more work in the coloring department.

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 05-10-2002 11:46 PM

nice pic dark. Your inking is really good and your cging in general's good as well.

the wooden fnce looks a little bland because the inking on the figure is so strong and detailed and the wood looks simple in comparison.

also his forefinger looks too thin in comparison to his other fingers which are really fat.

good work otherwise tho

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