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Topic: First post :)
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Pixie Nim
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Member # 35
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posted 07-10-2002 03:49 PM
Well, I think that face is lovely... but otherwise I'm not so sure... sorry about this, but get ready for the crit... ;)I know it's a trait of anime to change the proportions somewhat, but I think her head looks too big in comparison with her body, and then parts of the body look too small in comparison to other parts, if you know what I mean... I talking specifically about the *hands* and the *feet* here, I think they are particularly bad... not that I think there's anything wrong with the shape of the hands, just the size of them! The feet are a slightly odd shape, too - generally okay - but perhaps could use a little ref from a shoe shopping catalogue or summat... I also think her chest looks a bit weird. I see how her breasts are pressed to her chest by her arm, but they're fairly large and I think look a little flat, considering how her arms seem close to her chest - kinda like a pair of flat discs... also slightly low on her chest, should be a little higher up. I'm sorry if I'm being a little harsh here, but I'm honestly just trying to help, so I hope that's okay with you! There's a lot I like about it - that you've patterned her skirt (it looks very good, and not too many people are prepared to put in that sort of effort ;) ) - the face is lovely, as is the hair, absolutely spot on... The figure generally is good, it's just the relative proportions I think need a little work... anyhow, there's me 2p worth... hope this helps. Pixie
-------------------- sexy pants! hee hee!
Posts: 281 | From: ganjaland | Registered: Mar 2002 | IP: Logged
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