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G-StyLe
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posted 05-10-2002 09:10 PM     Profile for G-StyLe   Author's Homepage   Email G-StyLe     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hi everybody,
my first post in this forum ^^;
*note* I don't really know how to draw feet T.T

Enjoy ! ^^;

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tuigi
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posted 05-10-2002 09:11 PM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
NICE STUFF
nothin bad to crit exept for the feets.

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AKATT
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posted 05-10-2002 11:27 PM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
real nice pencils. the detail on her skirt is way cool, i love that loads. her feet are a bit dodge, they don't look like they're in a natural position.

ps your site's cool. nice and simple. liking that Fallen Angel CG

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FunkyC
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posted 06-10-2002 01:33 AM     Profile for FunkyC   Email FunkyC     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ooooh very nice, I also like the detail on that skirt too, and I like her hair. Lol feet are hard to draw arent they? Oh well, keep at it

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kaori shima
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posted 06-10-2002 01:55 AM     Profile for kaori shima   Author's Homepage   Email kaori shima     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
oh nice picture! ^o^ i like her expression, just keep working at those feet!

oh..welcome to the board! I is newbie too! ^.^

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Ayzie
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posted 06-10-2002 06:50 AM     Profile for Ayzie   Author's Homepage   Email Ayzie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
awesome stuff, welcome aboard!

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G-StyLe
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posted 06-10-2002 11:31 AM     Profile for G-StyLe   Author's Homepage   Email G-StyLe     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Heh, thank you ^^;

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Pixie Nim
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posted 07-10-2002 03:49 PM     Profile for Pixie Nim   Author's Homepage   Email Pixie Nim     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well, I think that face is lovely... but otherwise I'm not so sure... sorry about this, but get ready for the crit... ;)

I know it's a trait of anime to change the proportions somewhat, but I think her head looks too big in comparison with her body, and then parts of the body look too small in comparison to other parts, if you know what I mean... I talking specifically about the *hands* and the *feet* here, I think they are particularly bad... not that I think there's anything wrong with the shape of the hands, just the size of them! The feet are a slightly odd shape, too - generally okay - but perhaps could use a little ref from a shoe shopping catalogue or summat...

I also think her chest looks a bit weird. I see how her breasts are pressed to her chest by her arm, but they're fairly large and I think look a little flat, considering how her arms seem close to her chest - kinda like a pair of flat discs... also slightly low on her chest, should be a little higher up.

I'm sorry if I'm being a little harsh here, but I'm honestly just trying to help, so I hope that's okay with you! There's a lot I like about it - that you've patterned her skirt (it looks very good, and not too many people are prepared to put in that sort of effort ;) ) - the face is lovely, as is the hair, absolutely spot on... The figure generally is good, it's just the relative proportions I think need a little work...

anyhow, there's me 2p worth... hope this helps.

Pixie

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plastic_corpse
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posted 07-10-2002 04:52 PM     Profile for plastic_corpse   Email plastic_corpse     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Feet are bigger than you think.

You won't believe this until you try... if you put your foot next to your forearn - the heel inside your elbow - your toes will reach your wrist.

I found feet easier when I was told this - I always made them too small.

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 07-10-2002 10:35 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I like the overall feeling to this drawing makes for a nice rpg illustration.

But I say listen to Pixie's advises she has alot of good points there.

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Pyro X
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posted 07-10-2002 11:18 PM     Profile for Pyro X   Email Pyro X     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
great pic i aswell like the detail on the skirt but like G.i.A.m. said read pixies well because she basically hits it all

great pic


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neo
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posted 08-10-2002 12:51 AM     Profile for neo   Email neo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
She doesnt look like the kind of girl to wield such a cruel little sword. :>
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G-StyLe
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posted 08-10-2002 09:37 PM     Profile for G-StyLe   Author's Homepage   Email G-StyLe     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks a lot Pixie >.<, next time I'll try to don't make those mistake ^^;

Pastic_corpse: you are right I didn't know feet were that big o.O

Thank you ^^;

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Bugsy
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posted 09-10-2002 04:30 PM     Profile for Bugsy   Author's Homepage   Email Bugsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Yeah, it's even right in my case, and I have small feet!

*ahem* wunnerful picture G-Style. I especially like the feel of it It's like Giam said ^^;

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Shilu
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posted 11-10-2002 03:02 PM     Profile for Shilu   Email Shilu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nice picture, i like it looks good.
Well about her feet u said by urself.
My only critic is her left breast... it looks a bit strange (why are breasts always first thing to draw my attention?...hmmm... i should investigate this... )
Good pic, and i like ur HP too... especially the fallen Angel like someone allready said, and the knockknockknock-Dragon.

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