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Kirsty
Newbie

Member # 110

posted 24-10-2002 04:54 PM

Thought I would show a little something I made. Im only a newbie at manga as a whole but Im being taught and helped by a very good person (*huggles* he knows who he is

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http://www.one-existance.150m.com/ShakenEarthArt.htm

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FunkyC
Member

Member # 92

posted 25-10-2002 12:28 AM

Lets take a looketh *click*
*waits for it to load*.......

OOoooh not to shabby for a first attempt, I like the general atmosphere of the picture.
But watch out for the shading on the hair, hmmm how do I say this? Uh...well you know those yellow 'bits' in the hair? I dunno, it just looks like they shouldnt be there. Oh well, thats my naff advice. Oh btw, I like the flower petals flying around, makes it look windy, wheeeee!

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Shirai
Grand Member

Member # 40

posted 25-10-2002 04:09 PM

Hello n welcome to the board Kirsty :3

Funky has a point about the hair me thinks you may have overdone it a little X3 usually the light would be reflected around the crown of the hair :3

Also not quite sure what happened to her left cheek, the bit just under her eye~ should've been rounded off? :3

It would've been easier to see what needed improving or fixing if you drawn the rest of her body but as you said its your first time and frankly I have to admit it is pretty good, the colouring and the idea X3

I'm interested in this person who helped you is he from this board? X3

Anyway enjoy your stay~ (hopefully you'll stay here forever bwehehe) X3

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Random_Task
Grand Member

Member # 30

posted 26-10-2002 01:43 AM

the colour is awesome! i love the choice of colours you have used and you have the saturation perfect...well done

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 26-10-2002 01:53 PM

hey that looks pretty cool (besides of the highlights in the hair) I like the overall color theme alot.

Only thing I would do to improve it, is a bit difference in the line wight and a more interesting BG.

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