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Kirsty
Newbie

Member # 110

posted 11-11-2002 03:21 PM

Seeming I havent posted any artwork and yes with me being a newbie I thought I would give you a little sneaky at something Im working on....

There was a background but it didnt look right so now Im kinda stuck on what to put behind her.... ne ideas?

All your comments will be great to me because I need some comments on this lol

Luv Kirsty XxX

Posts: 12 | From: Derbyshire, UK | Registered: Oct 2002 | IP: Logged

Kirsty
Newbie

Member # 110

posted 11-11-2002 03:22 PM

Here the piccy lol forgot it =P Silly me =)

http://www.geocities.com/virtuallyvirgo/swimgurlpic.jpg

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 11-11-2002 06:27 PM

some basic anatomy problems. try to center the boobs and the main body

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Jackel
Grand Member

Member # 47

posted 11-11-2002 06:37 PM

Yea, what tuigi said.

Her face looks good though and I really like her hair.

Good job, hope to see more from you

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Pixie Nim
Grand Member

Member # 35

posted 12-11-2002 11:46 AM

mm, face and hair are cute - but Tuigi's right, you need to work on anatomy a little. Her head's too big in comparison to the body, as well... colour choices are very nice, too... ;)

Pixie

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 15-11-2002 02:06 AM

Argh I'm propably a bit late with all this but uhwee.
Basicly I agree with what the others have allready said.
But I think the main problem with her body is the fact that she is missing a ribcage and a hip bone.
Those two bones practical make a huge part of a human (and most others lifeforms) body. Try to look at photos of people or observe yourself how those two bones shows under the skin and learn the position of them in various poses.

As for the coloring, I would suggest a higher contrast between the dark and light parts, especial the skin.

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 17-11-2002 06:15 AM

for some reason yahoo won't let me see.

and yes i've tried the usual gubbins with the cut and paste

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Posts: 451 | From: London, England | Registered: Apr 2002 | IP: Logged

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