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SilentDan
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Member # 117

posted 15-12-2002 11:21 PM

This is my new comic book character, I'm really proud with her, tell me what y'all think, I'd appreciate your opinions. http://www.deviantart.com/view/1026766

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Pyro X
Grand Member

Member # 94

posted 16-12-2002 06:42 AM

Dan you are the man those fingers of yours should be very proud man im honored just being able to write to you, yeah the pictures i keep tryin to show is one of my main comic book chars. for my new comic, but man you are goin places in life with talent like that great job man

Pyro gives you two thumbs up
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SilentDan
Mega Member

Member # 117

posted 16-12-2002 05:00 PM

Haha, thanx alot, thats he sort of encouragement I need!

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 16-12-2002 06:19 PM

Wau I Like it everything looks perfect.
I especial Love those small Jokes (like the belt and the Ank tattoo).
The Coloring is also pretty thight maybe the skin shading around the face, arms might look better, if it where as dark as it is around her legs.

Only real minus is that you left out her right eye .

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SilentDan
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Member # 117

posted 16-12-2002 07:36 PM

The right eye is supposed to be left out, symbolic, makes her look crazy.

It's not like I forgot people had two eyes.

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 17-12-2002 12:37 PM

*waits patiently for deviant to open the page*

Ah there it is XD It looks great!
I kinda like the missing eye. Often artists don't draw eyes at all when the hair somewhat covers it. I think it's a bit of a stylistic preference ^.^ My critique would be about the arms, they bend a bit funny. I think that in this position the upper arm wouldn't cut into the forearm.

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SilentDan
Mega Member

Member # 117

posted 17-12-2002 05:29 PM

Thanx for your input, I'm working on another picture of the same girl
Different pose this time.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 15-02-2003 07:50 PM

Wow, she's real creepy...
Seriously, love the work u done on giving shine to the blade. The whole sorta 'normal but decrepit' thing comes through quite well, like she's some overgrown kid. u gonna stick a background on it? Please do at some point - the white kinda detracts from the whole atmosphere. Aside from that, great drawing. Looking forward to the next one u put up...

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