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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 31-12-2002 12:13 AM

Someone on Elfwood requested this; I had to draw a character from a description.

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Desert Rain

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kaori shima
Grand Member

Member # 98

posted 02-01-2003 05:38 PM

wonderful picture!!

how long did it take you to make it? you have tons of details!

but my favorite details are the leaves in the background-they seem soft and natural, the details you did on his black clothing, and the patch of dirt hes stepping on is nicely done too!

my only critiques are: the bone in his neck seems off, and his left side of his face seems just a tad off also, but that could just be me

[ 02-01-2003: Message edited by: kaori shima ]

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flashdragoon
Grand Member

Member # 81

posted 03-01-2003 02:08 AM

wow thats really good, only crit I have is his arrow seems just a little too short, at least fo his longbow.

[ 03-01-2003: Message edited by: flashdragoon ]

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 07-01-2003 11:41 AM

haha

if flashdragon hadnt pointed it out, I wouldnt even noticed that he holds a arrow there (yup it is to short).

But other then this the image is great.
Nothing really to crit. maybe some of the textures are a bit too uniform, but only if you stare on it for a long time.

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SilentDan
Mega Member

Member # 117

posted 11-01-2003 10:39 PM

ever the pesimist! It looks really cool, really really cool, I'd like to see a piece with a more detailed outfit. plus your sites banner will be up asap

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 13-01-2003 02:35 PM

Woah- looking really impressive Bugsy! At firstit kinda reminds me of that Ragnarok pic you posted her when the board was still in it's infant stage

BUT if you compare the two you can see how much you've improved. The lighting is more realistic and kinda similar to our all friend Z-Gravity's CGs.

Perhaps you coulda added a little more muscel definition to the right arm, made both arms a little longer and the hands a little bit bigger? These would only be suttle changes but something to keep in mind for next time. What do you think?

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Organic Metal

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Bugsy
Moderator

Member # 9

posted 13-01-2003 08:21 PM

Cheers, all!

Kaori: It took me about 2 days to make, all in all about 14 hours I think 9_9; hmm gotta keep practicing on the neck muscles XD

Flashdragoon: Hehe, actually, his arrow is waaaay too short, not just a little XD

Giam: Thanks :3 I gotta find a better way to paint the textures, but I will!

SD: cool, cheers!

Bomu: Thanks, I really should work on muscle structure, I guess drawing like this happens when you're scrawny yourself *is a twig*

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Desert Rain

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