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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 05-02-2003 06:41 PM

It is based on a project a friend and I are working on. check it out here on www.freezone.co.uk/angeleyeuk (when it gets updated of course). The pic is of the 2 principle characters, Angelo and Michelle, and how much in love they are blah blah blah boy meets girl etc. u get the idea.

take a look and tell me what you think, how it need so be improved, etc. thank u.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 07-02-2003 07:33 PM

If the pic doesn't come up, copy and paste this link: http://angeleyeuk.angelcities.com/pictures2/sayem/newdrawings/akiraandtrinity4.jpg

thanks for ur co-operation peeps

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 10-02-2003 06:34 PM

Looks overall quite nice, but there are certain spots I think are weird.

The belly of the girl for example, what are those lines in the middle supposed to mean .
Also she seems to miss half of her left shoulder ( .

And the arm of the guy is in my opinion to round out.

But dont let those errors discourage you keep on working and I'm sure you will improve alot.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 14-02-2003 10:24 PM

You ask about the lines - those are supposed to be the contours of her abdomen (but on hindsight, maybe i was better off using colouring pencils to show that). Her shoulder is missing because Angelo is covering her shoulder with his arm and her hair also covers her hair. You did have a point about his right arm - i saw it again and realised it seems to be longer than his left arm (perhas I extended his upper arm a little bit too much). Thanks for the comments, though.

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