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Kirsty
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posted 28-02-2003 04:01 PM     Profile for Kirsty   Author's Homepage   Email Kirsty     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Heres a new pic I have just done. Please check it out and post ur comments on it for me
www.freewebs.com/kirstylouiseharris/childzplay.jpg

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SilentDan
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posted 28-02-2003 05:07 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Very nice I love the colouring style, especially the eyes

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Angelo
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posted 28-02-2003 05:11 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nicely coloured. However, one eye is a slightly different size to the other, and the face is a bit out of shape. For kids, I normally widen the bottom part of the face (from the eyes downwards) so that it is ALMOST the same width as the forehead. Just a couple of criticisms - i do not intend them harshly, just as suggestions for improving the picture.

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Angelo
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posted 28-02-2003 05:13 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ah, one more thing - try including highlights on the dress as well. they're fine on the doll, and ur shadows on the dress are good, but u need to put them on the dress too. It's a cool pic, just a few issues need clearing up.

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