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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 01-03-2003 08:24 PM

http://angeleyeuk.angelcities.com/sd/michpinupfinal.jpg - copy and paste/drag and drop/click
http://angeleyeuk.angelcities.com/sd/michpinup.jpg - alternative version, based on Ayzie's suggestion of background

a little pic inspired by a Gillian Anderson pic. very sorta FHM-ish, if i do say so myself I already e-mailed this one to bomu, and these are the links that'll work, neo. anyways, hope u all like it.

[ 02-03-2003: Message edited by: Angelo ]

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 01-03-2003 09:58 PM

First out I'm rather suprized,
I saw the version in work in progress this morning, and had a few points on it(darker shadows, and the belly muscles).
You allready took care of them, concrats.

But you know how it is, when you kill mistakes others will rize.

First thing is, that in my opinion, she needs a wider hip(bone) (right now she has a rather small butt).
The other prob I have, is the shading.
It seems that you did alot of "pillow shading".
You can avoid this by thinking about a light source and sticking to it while you shade.

BTW. as noone has done important comments. And the link isnt working anymore, I'm gonna delete your work in progress tread.

[ 01-03-2003: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

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Ayzie
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Member # 25

posted 02-03-2003 10:02 AM

Hey dude! I think this is one of your best out of the pics that you've posted. I agree with GiAm on his comments. Though, you also might want to tone down the saturation of the background, that is, make the blue a bit more "gray". That way the background wouldn't take away the focus of the character.

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neo
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Member # 88

posted 05-03-2003 08:19 PM

Everybody can colour better n me. Not fair

Iz good but ill leave a more comprehensive crits list l8r, I havent got my arty head on right now. Too much Devil May Cry.

I see what you mean about the sparda sword, especially when you use stinger. How do I play normal mode again ?, it keeps puttin me on hard and I hate hard. Four hits kills you and Ive a bloody big life bar.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 05-03-2003 08:54 PM

when u beat the game 1st time, where it says "Do you want challege Hard Mode?", select 'no' and u should continue from normal mode. If that doesn't work, u'll hav to complete Hard, so u can select normal again, to use same char and stats. hope that helps m8.

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neo
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Member # 88

posted 05-03-2003 09:21 PM

It didnt ask me to select hard mode. It just put me on it. I finished it on normal first time, then it just plonks me on hard.

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 06-03-2003 09:11 PM

Uh you wanted comments on the Eyes.
Well looks good enough for me, maybe a little bit more closed (only a few mm tho).

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