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Pyro X
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posted 24-03-2003 10:24 PM     Profile for Pyro X   Email Pyro X     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey everyone this is jimmy a different char in my upcomming comic "What A Life" tell me what you think Jimmy Suzu
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JBinc84
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posted 25-03-2003 09:16 PM     Profile for JBinc84   Author's Homepage   Email JBinc84     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
overall I like it.... theres just something bugging me... I think its the posture in general, it seems a bit 'stilted' if that makes sense, although the character design is good. Also it'd be nice if it was a bit bigger!

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Shirai
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posted 26-03-2003 07:33 PM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I agree with JBinc :3

His pose is a little stiff perhaps if you tilt his shoulders back and chest out with his hands on his hips, it would certainly give him a defiant and bad ass attitude lol you'd need to be crazy to wield a gun like that (is it a gun? must be a gun Xp)~ but that may depend on what your character is like X3

His clothes are cool and the shading is nice too, if you got anymore sketches post em :3


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