posted 28-03-2003 06:52 AM
WAU that looks very cool. Only thing that it needs is a shadow to ground her . And if I would be very evil I would say a little bit line variation wouldnt hurt.
And now I demand you to show us more !!!
btw. a warm wellcome onboard to you.
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posted 28-03-2003 02:29 PM
Reminds me of Digimon. I hate it when a topic is drownded by a load of others and you don't see it straight away. Lookin forward to seeing more of your art Rail.
I agree with GIAM about the shadow, a long one, casted underneath the text.
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posted 28-03-2003 03:07 PM
Wow, that's pretty cool. Your style on the girl resembles that of the guy who does the comic on www.megatokyo.com (don't worry, I ain't criticising, I'm just drawing up parallels). It's a cool cover. Like G said, a shadow on the ground gives it some sort of context, and mebbe a background change might make the pic a bit more exciting. Aside from that, it's cool. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff. I've also got a bit of a manga project going on as well (it's still in the story stage lol, but I've done concept work of the characters) - check out the link on my signature, for more info.
posted 30-03-2003 11:21 AM
Hi Rail, I love your style! The coloring's so slick, and the character design's interesting. Welcome to OM !
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posted 30-03-2003 01:55 PM
I think a long shadow and a small black n white background photo behind the girl.
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