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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 29-04-2003 12:27 AM

as it was said in my title i am very proud of this one, i took me some time to complete and it s the first time i try screen-tones (which i really like btw) so i would really appreciate some comments cause i put some heath in that picture.
i finnaly found a name for her i named her: Elina
i think it s a nice name ^_^ i named her after someone i really like and respect. http://www.geocities.com/tuigi42/sgelinabw.jpg

[ 29-04-2003: Message edited by: tuigi ]

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flashdragoon
Grand Member

Member # 81

posted 29-04-2003 03:32 AM

very nice, clean up the lines and it will be primo, btw gotta love that vacant expression on her face lol

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 03-05-2003 01:27 AM

I like your new head style tuigi and the image shows that you put some effort into it.

Only thing I would still do tho, is giving here a nose a mouth.

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Dekar
Grand Member

Member # 122

posted 03-05-2003 05:36 AM

Hmm.. something cute. I like your interesting low-trim skirt design.

Crits for improvement,

You might want to add more perspective to those limbs make them a touch more rounded to joint to joint they are too straight. Although that mainly depends on the persons age and strength.

-In the future you might want to make your faces look a bit more rounded with a slight curve from the chin point and more outward rounded on the checks. Then go up in a more slanted curve towards the hair.

Just try to think when drawing human anatomy there is no such thing as a perfect straight line or a perfect circle on any part of a body really. If you can grasp that you’re on your way to becoming one high detailed artist, even if it's just in anime style.

Hopefully those help a bit.

Seems I'm stocking your previous comments Giam 4 in a row..
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