Last sunday (and monday) I did the 24 hour comic with Chikin of www.kindamanga.com and Plau of www.spoonbard.com .
I got 22 pages done. =) which is not amazing, but pretty impressive since it's the first comic I've ever written.

I don't wanna spend ages explaining what a 24 hour comic is, so if you don't already know but you wanna, go here. http://www.scottmccloud.com/inventions/24hr/24hr.html
the 24 hour comic is a cool, cool thing, and totally worth doing if you're dedicated to your comics. It's also VERY VERY hard work - it was MUCH harder than I thought it would be.

Anyway, my 24 hour comic is currently not online. it will be asap, as soon as I've finished designing my website, which shouldn't take too long.

And this? this is page 15. it won't make much sense out of context. But I liked it, so I inked, coloured and lettered it in photoshop yesterday (so it doesn't count as part of the 24 hour comic, really).

Tell me what you think! This is my first coloured comic book page!

http://www.pixie.4mg.com/images/15_lettering.jpg

wheee! with the dragging and dropping and the cutting and the pasting. XDXDXD

Pixel =)

[ 25-07-2003: Message edited by: Pixie Nim ]

As for critics of page 15:

Overall its very cool only two things I think are missing first some more line variation I think it could give everything more dynamic.

The other thing is just minor, I would give the guy standing on the hand an darker shadow under his feets.
Right now, it looks more like the shadows are produced by the hand itself and not the guy.

But besides of that I look forward to read the full story, behind the two.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

die, 4th wall! DIE! XD

couple of days before this I was moaning to a mate about how I was fed up with feeling like I was stuck in an endless practice loop - never felt my art was good enough to do anything with. And I wanted to get to a stage where it came easily and I was satisfied.... by the end of the 24 hour comic, that's how I felt. ROCK! *so chuffed!*