moving on. I'm doin some work for a webpage and it just so happens the person wants a tee shirt logo too so i did one. finally, art is starting to pay off.

anyways, heres the image i came up with.

http://www.thegamespage.com/graphite/images/finishedview.jpg

the colours and inks are very clean and good, I likes 'em! I might be tempted to make the lights and darks slightly stronger - she looks slightly flat to me, and could possibly do with a bit more definition and contrast?
also, her fingers look a bit knobbly, but nothing too noticeable.
one other thing - her breasts look a bit perfectly spherical and shiny, and perhaps a tad too far apart. they need deeper shadows on 'em (perhaps in her cleavage too) and get rid of that shine, imo. it looks a bit strange.

the hair and face are great, and the overall design I like - the finished image, bar the few crits above, looks very clean and professional - definately a good thing. =)

Yep make them shadows bigger darker! define that booutiful bodeh of hers! her breasts daamn make em bigger! XD perhaps pushed them closer together like Pixie said. Like them WonderBra ads Wooooyeahh! X3 maybe a lille eye shadow could give her a seductive look