posted 08-12-2003 07:11 AM
Uhm that is very bright, personaly I think the background and writing take too much attention to them. I would suggest to either use less vibrant colors, or another way to make the girl pop out a bit more is to draw her with heavier lines.
Apart from this I like it the composing is very good and the coloring of the girl turned out nice.
keep it up and coming .
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posted 09-01-2004 08:37 PM
I agree with GiaM about the lines, but I still love the pic, very cool. I always have trouble with backgrounds, never know what to do with em!