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Intergalactic_del
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posted 31-01-2004 08:14 PM     Profile for Intergalactic_del   Email Intergalactic_del     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
three pics and a sad story
pic 1
pic 2
pic 3
the story goes down like this:
Andrew finds himself in a world where everything he ever loved is either gone or changed for the worse. He finds his greatest enemy now rules the world, so Andrew heads for his kingdom in order to kill him. But his enemy doesn't wish to face Andrew just yet and sends his best friend Lia to dispatch him. Lia has been currupted by the enemy and attacks Andrew without hesitation. Andrew knows he has no choice, so he fights back but he is an inexperienced demigod and Lia is more powerful than before. The exchange blow after blow. Andrew keeping in pace with Lia... Andrew and Lia fight for what seems to him an eternity. neither one holding back. Andrew tries to reason to her but Lia is deaf to his words. she catches Andrew off guard and clenches him by the throat. Andrew in desperation focuses all his energy into his hand, kicks Lia in face, and pierces her stomach.Andrew takes Lia into his arms as she slowy perishes. she asks,
" please...just tell me once before I die," Andrew Gently presses his lips against hers and whispers into her ear,
"I love you."
tears rolling down her eyes, Lia smiles as she gives her last breath.
Andrew gently lays her on the ground and stands quietly over his friend's body.
He then spreads his wings and flies off to his enemy's kingdom to make him pay for his friends death.

before you tear into my shitty writing please note i'm no writer, nor do i claim to be one. this is just a stupid story thats been in my head that i just recently decided to draw out. as for the drawings, well... don't be to harsh, i'm fairly proud of these.

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inter_d
yo daddy

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 17-02-2004 09:48 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
wrahh how could this go unoticed.
very well done I-del.
I like the dynamics and pose overall (andrew shouldnt be in a sideview in the scond one tho ). and the story aint that bad neither, keep it up I-del

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Yuki H.
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posted 17-02-2004 09:45 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I like those pictures especially that they are sad the third one looked like a sceen from shakespear's romeo and juliette

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Tri_kento
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posted 19-02-2004 02:04 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well.. better then wat i can do i only have one problem i really know i should not complain because this is great but... andrew looks alot like vegeta off of Dragon Ball Z sry if this is insulting i just found it so ^_^!

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Intergalactic_del
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posted 24-02-2004 07:44 PM     Profile for Intergalactic_del   Email Intergalactic_del     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
damnit, i get that alot. thinkin' about givin' andrew a perm or something...
his excuse for his hair isn't saiyan hair,though, it's a cow lick
by the way, hi g.i.a.m
long time, no see

[ 24-02-2004: Message edited by: Intergalactic_del ]

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call me del
the funky monkey
inter_d
yo daddy

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Tri_kento
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posted 24-02-2004 11:53 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well i am glad your not mad .But for the cow lick that must of been one big cow. hehe ya i know corny dumb joke ^_^!

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masterchief
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posted 25-02-2004 02:40 AM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey intergalactic_del!Whoa I cant believe I remembered that. I like the drawings and the story is good. i want to see and read about how he kills the evil guy that pitted his friend against him.

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