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Lucia-Chan
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posted 14-04-2004 06:09 PM     Profile for Lucia-Chan   Author's Homepage   Email Lucia-Chan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I've made alot of advancements in the last year in my drawing ability I bought myself a wacom tablet 2 weeks ago this is my second completed piece using it

Constructive criticism and/or compliments welcome lol

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Bugsy
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posted 17-04-2004 12:35 PM     Profile for Bugsy   Author's Homepage   Email Bugsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey, going good. I have two suggestions: try to make the inking less 'chunky' (scanning large and zooming out more might help), and don't be afraid to shade more and harder. Some places (like the shirt) need darker shadows, or sharper edges (this is especially the case when objects that aren't far away from the surface cast a shadow on it: for example: the hair on the skin)

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