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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 09-08-2004 12:15 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/9565957/ - just a pic inspired by SC2's Ivy and all the goth music I listen to.

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SilentDan
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Member # 117

posted 10-08-2004 01:50 PM

Not a goth music fan myself Angelo, but I like the pic!

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<Sparko>
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posted 22-08-2004 07:25 AM

Shit.

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Angelo
Extreme Member

Member # 134

posted 22-08-2004 11:47 AM

Well, thanks for the compliment (!). Perhaps you could try giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM?

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 22-08-2004 09:39 PM

my my is it that time of the year again,
sparko learn to write full sentence. and how to give proper critics (no matter if its positiv or negative).

with that.

my own critics.

anatomical wise I think you should give her bigger hips to give her a more sexy look.

also I think her shoulders fall down a little bit too much.
but thats about it.

the overal color sheme is good, but I recommend you check out the tutorials on this site http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/farp/index.html , "the art" in the left menu, under the drawing, there should be 2 colored pencil tuts.
I think that can help you push your coloring to the next level.

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Angelo
Extreme Member

Member # 134

posted 23-08-2004 07:16 PM

Thanks G. Until I get Photoshop up and running on my laptop, I'm gna be doing plenty of colour pencil pieces. I appreciate the link.

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Si13Nt
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Member # 221

posted 24-08-2004 01:41 PM

lmao sparko is a good critic yea?

i cant see anything really wrong with it really, but i agree with G.i.A.m, part from that ya cool pic

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ColorFool
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Member # 240

posted 25-08-2004 11:14 PM

It's ok, the pose could be better maybe. I tend to like colored pencils more :-)

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