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Topic: Update3: Hell comic Pages 1-2/ Kung fu comic Pages 1-12

Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 08-10-2004 01:10 AM

well ive already posted this on polykarbon in the fightclub section, but im so proud of it I thought id post it here too ;p let me know what you think.
Gonna keep updating it as more pages come

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 08-10-2004 01:36 AM

I won't show the pic, all i get is a banner on the top of the screen, ?

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 08-10-2004 11:25 PM

really? thats odd it works for me. if you want just go to my gallery in deviant art its under Jats

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Bomu
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posted 11-10-2004 12:13 AM

Not a bad little comic. It sets the scene well, which it obviously the most important part of the initial few pages. Mind you, some comics rush in and don't illustrate the situation which leaves me feeling confused! It's better than my first comic page at least

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 11-10-2004 04:16 AM

hehe cheers. its my first time trying to do backgrounds, out of laziness basically. Im about to finish the second page, maybe Ill keep this thread going

the other people in fightclub seem to be going slowly so maybe Ill solo it, Im finding it good practice. or I could do side stories I guess while Im waiting for them

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Jats1
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posted 11-10-2004 05:16 PM

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 11-10-2004 06:44 PM

Well I did a spyware search on my comp and for some reason everthing works great agian. Stupid spy-ware"grrr" any ways am able to see the comic now.

comments" good stuff, I recall trying to draw a comic , but it kinda sucks when your drawing skills do, lol.

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Canadian surfer
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posted 11-10-2004 06:56 PM

nice comic way better then i could do i cant draw all the little box thingys wich is why i never do comics lol guess that makes me lazy.

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 17-11-2004 12:53 AM

Ok I felt guilty about how many picture threads I have compared to everyone else so Im re-using this one lol. Got bored of the hell one, tri reminded me, with his kung fu comment somewhere, that Im doing a kung fu one now. Yay! gotta love kungfu! It features Shen fighting some random kid from the polykarbon board's character. He started as an ancient, miniature statue from the met museum (see speedpaint thread) which I 'adjusted'.

Update! Useful information is: The guy knocked me out in his pages, and parallel to our fight are several other pairs who are gradually getting capture by mysterious ninjas and taken to a secret base.

Im not colouring them partly cos colouring whole comic pages takes AGES and partly because I wanna learn special effects with ink.

Anyone who is able to draw a martial arts person of some kind (which Im sure is all of you) is welcome to challenge me! just post a page or two in this thread and Ill respond Ill probably update also as I do more pages.

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Angelo
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posted 17-11-2004 03:04 PM

Dude that kung fu one looks pretty kickass (and I recognise one of the things he did - when he did that pressure points thing on the guy's shoulder, I think that might have been a Di Maq [I spell that right?] mover). Hehe I'll be happy to have a go drawing a Wing Chun guy to challenge your praying mantis master! (if I get the time, of course).

The hell one is pretty spectacular as well. The thought of some kind of battle in hell sounds pretty cool already - you gonna continue with it?

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 17-11-2004 03:29 PM

Thanks man! well everyone else in the hell fightclub kinda bugged out, and it was a pain to colour so im kinda shelving it.

the kung fu one is more fun anyway. dbz style energy blasts and flying are acceptable and in fact encouraged. it would be cool if lots of ppl from this board made a character and had a go like the speed painting thread

oh, and my guy probably won't stick to praying mantis - i think Im doing tai chi next, and Ill probably work through several sword styles.. click on the 'shen' link to see his profile

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 17-11-2004 09:19 PM

ooo make hime to the "Iron monkey paw!" I saw it on a game i rented 4 xbox (4gotit tho) it would love it if u got him to do it.

also do recall the conversation in witch i used kung fu? o was it when i told u guys my favorite band was "an asian kung-fu generation" witch i would suggest getting "they got chops"as it were to speak of.

any ways strangly enought am working on a mage that kinda knows the japanese magic fu-u-newb lol.
(o also i got my new sketch book, it's a 5star one it has 30 pages,should last 4 2 weeks maby. )

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Jats1
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posted 17-11-2004 09:26 PM

quote:
I 2 have been having some odd dreams, lot's have me doing kung fu or something I sops it's because am looking into a student exchange in japan ?

you should do some pages and jump into the fray tri! fight scenes are awesome practice. theyre making me improve a lot anyway.

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Jats1
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posted 23-11-2004 12:39 AM

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Dagan
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posted 08-12-2004 01:35 AM

Don't ask me how I missed this page!! This is too much. you should be very proud. You have a real knack for this! Unbelievable work! Can't compliment this one enough!

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 18-01-2005 10:52 PM

ok some more lazily thought out kung fu craziness!

hope you guys like it

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Bomu
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posted 19-01-2005 02:08 AM

Great stuff -love the Kung-fu comic. Been following it since the start. I was gonna say, the chosen angles are and panel layout could be improved, but the pages tell the story well without confusion, so I'd keep it as is. And although it's full of cheesy lines, it makes me smile. Keep it up

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Erock
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posted 19-01-2005 04:42 AM

Ding ding and the winner is Jats1! Dude yea that kicked ass big time. That scene where the dragon heads come out of the guys hand is so funny

and the badguy ninja are cool too. Comics are hard to do but you did a great job, cant wait till you start drawing comics in void!

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 19-01-2005 05:12 AM

hehe i love it, brings a smile to my face and then some.

wish i had the work ethic to do a comic.

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 20-01-2005 05:48 PM

Hehe pleased you guys enjoyed it.

Bomu: Originally had the intention of doing really creative camera angles as I am using this fightclub mostly just to practice drawing varied stuff, but looking back I think I got confused and seem to be praticing unusual kung fu poses instead. Any ideas for good angles? I keep meaning to do I good wormseye perpective but never manged it. Also do you mean a more crazy frame system? Ive attempted that in the past, but admired some guys really stubbornly neat square frames somewhere and decided it would be cool if the whole lot was in the same format. Maybe ill change it.

Oh btw this post was mostly to get on to page 2 cos I think if I stick anymore pics in this one it will make dial up users die a little inside Think I need one more to puch it over so some1 say something

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posted 20-01-2005 08:20 PM

mmmmmmm dr pepper

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Bomu
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posted 20-01-2005 08:50 PM

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Originally posted by Jats1:
Bomu: Originally had the intention of doing really creative camera angles as I am using this fightclub mostly just to practice drawing varied stuff, but looking back I think I got confused and seem to be praticing unusual kung fu poses instead. Any ideas for good angles? I keep meaning to do I good wormseye perpective but never manged it. Also do you mean a more crazy frame system? Ive attempted that in the past, but admired some guys really stubbornly neat square frames somewhere and decided it would be cool if the whole lot was in the same format. Maybe ill change it.

I was thinking crazy frame and panel system like you get it some of the typical published US comics, but it's all good. As far as angles go, I'd just check out existing comics and see what they're doing to give u a few ideas.

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Erock
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posted 20-01-2005 09:50 PM

this should take up some space

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Jats1
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posted 20-01-2005 10:40 PM

hehe. Yay! fanart

yeah I might consider it bomu, but i think i might leave it for void, id be kind of nice to have craploads of uniform pages so it all seems like the same thing. Im even trying to keep the style the same though I wouldn't describe it as my best. The idea behind this fightclub is kind of informal, so some people post pages in H pencils that look like rather sketchy rough drafts, Im in a minority just by inking mine lol. anyway, Im trying to improve at drawing fireballs and things in black and white, I can now do some pretty hefty ones in photoshop lol, just wait till Ive learnt maya. So far Ive made a pagoda and a hammer hehe. I might start feathering and stuff in my inks though for practice.

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Jats1
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posted 18-02-2005 04:35 PM

getting it to page 2

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