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Dagan
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posted 22-11-2004 03:34 AM     Profile for Dagan   Email Dagan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ok this pic was drawn using the pen tool in PhotoShop. Then colored in the same program. Shocking
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Jats1
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posted 22-11-2004 03:30 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I think its very good. I think it could be greatly improved if the line width around the character and the computer box things were increased however, as well as adding lines where the floor meets the wall and in the corner. Also, more dynamic shading would emphasis the brightness of the object he is holding.

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SilentDan
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posted 23-11-2004 03:34 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Its all coloured well and all, I just don't get the picture? What is going on? lol Nice pic anyhoo!

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Dagan
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posted 23-11-2004 04:30 PM     Profile for Dagan   Email Dagan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
What is going on? I ask the same thing myself. This is a picture that I did for a company that I freelance for. They requested this scene. Personally I hate the overall picture. I agree with the first statment about the line work. i fell it needs more lines as well. I did do them but they are hidden under the layers. I guess i should uncover them at least for my portfolio.
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Tri_kento
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posted 23-11-2004 06:19 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i would suggest to use more tones and shades, few grads as well would help, I personally don't like the lens flare (but i see u need it to show the power serge) this pic kinda reminds me of something off of mega man.

good job tho.

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Losterin Galanodel
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posted 01-12-2004 02:54 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I like it, although the lens flare looks weird. If I could remember the place, I could give you the tutorial too the place that teaches you how to make minor lightning and power serge effects. Damn my feeble mind! As well, I don't like how your name is scrawled across it, it is just distracting. All in all though great picture.
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