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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 30-11-2004 05:06 PM

Well I realised that recently Ive been drawing monsters instead of girls, and became worried, so I approached this year's christmas card a little early. Was thinking along the lines of 'merry christmas from the sleighboy mansion'; then I noticed one of the elves looked rather familiar......

Anyway, there are still things I don't think look right, and it would be very helpful if you guys can suggest how to improve it got a few weeks to tweak

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Dagan
Member

Member # 259

posted 30-11-2004 08:04 PM

Well I am afraid that I have no suggestion on how to improve it. I really like your art. It is right in my taste realm. Again you have put out a piece that has wowed me. Good job!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 30-11-2004 10:50 PM

I would suggest work on ur faces all ur drawings if seen it seems u don't really put detailed faces on people.

other then that good drawing, not my christmas card ideal but neh gtg

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 30-11-2004 11:35 PM

Love the girls, love the outfits. It's good you've put in multiple characters and a background as this is something most people don't like the attempt!

As Tri mentioned, if you wanna work on face details, perhaps try a close up portrait to allow extra detail since I think it would look too cluttered on a pic like this with smaller characters.

But yeah, good work. I have promised a x-mas card of my own, but still haven't started and I know what I'm like- it'll end up taking at least a few weeks so I should really get a move on.. I just can't think of a decent theme for it.

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SilentDan
Mega Member

Member # 117

posted 01-12-2004 01:23 PM

The drawing is great, but I feel that you need to show the depth a bit more, it all looks flat if you know what I mean. I'm not entirely sure how you can do this lol but when theres a will there is a way! The Christmas presents could be at more of an angle to make it look more fluid and less graphiccy! I love the poses, of the girls, great stuff

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Cloud
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Member # 276

posted 27-12-2004 12:04 AM

I think you might need to put more detail on the face... my oppinion anyways.

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