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kidney
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posted 10-12-2004 01:41 AM     Profile for kidney   Email kidney     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I am 11 years old and I drew this!!!
KIMI

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Losterin Galanodel
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posted 10-12-2004 02:52 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I don't like it, it looks slopped and the lines a jagged, if you ask me, do it again and smooth the whole thing out.
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Si13Nt
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posted 10-12-2004 04:54 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
lol talk about crushin the kids hopes and dreams

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SilentDan
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posted 10-12-2004 05:43 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I think its excellent for an 11 year old, better than I ever was at 11. Jeez Losterin, hows about a lil' tact

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Bomu
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posted 10-12-2004 09:21 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well done kidney- It's the first Kimi art I've seen since the book came out! Keep on truckin'

[for those that done know, Kimi is a character in my book "Step-by-step Manga (released only through book fairs at the moment, will be in stores world wide next year, fingers crossed)]

Losterin, a little less of the negativity, 'k? and check out these guide lines before you give your next critique

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Dagan
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posted 11-12-2004 12:46 AM     Profile for Dagan   Email Dagan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
11 years old! This is far better than I could do at that age..... Far better! And I was thought to be pretty good at that age. I like that you have lighting down so well. It shows a real advanced abilty on your part. The colors are beautiful. Most kids at this age use some pretty clashing colors, but you have done extremely well in this area as well.
When it comes to Manga art, I feel that some of the best are gathered here in this site....You fit right in! I can hardley wait to see what drawing you will produce in the future. Great job!!!

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Yuki H.
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posted 12-12-2004 05:22 AM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
wow...I am surprised! purdi colours! I was a bit advanced in drawing two years ago also. That reminds me of me! guahaha
Keep up the good work.
I bet you are going to get better in no time! really. Just take your time and work hard!
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Saber
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posted 12-12-2004 06:40 AM     Profile for Saber   Author's Homepage   Email Saber     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Wow, that's awsome. You've got some real talent, especially for an eleven year old. I really like all the colors.

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Angelo
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posted 12-12-2004 09:14 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hehe much better than my first attempts at drawing (to repeat an oft-repeated cliche). Here are some tutorial sites for you, so as to improve your art (not saying Ben's books aren't good enough, but always handy to have more than one source of tuition):
http://www.polykarbon.com http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/tutorials

And don't be afraid to mess around with the style a little. I've been adding a little more realism to my characters' faces (as an example), so have a go with the form, after mastering some of the basics and stuff. But you have potential, that much I can see, and please continue posting (don't let that comment get you down, no-one starts perfect).

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Erock
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posted 14-12-2004 12:23 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well i spos 4 a 11 year older ur doing great but i still gotta comment none the less so here it goes.('ll go easy on yea )

1. i would suggest working on basic shapes so u can build on better lines and grooves.

2. i would also suggest lookedited by: Erock ]


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Cloud
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posted 16-12-2004 05:24 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
oh yeah? I swear on my heart that I am 10 years old and I drew THIS:

And THIS:

uhh... kidney, mabye u should put a little more posts up (so your posts counter will rise from 1) and so u can become a higher level-member (like me
) but like Tri_kento said, it's to have a high quality of post, not high quanity. AND HE'S DAMN RIGHT!

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Bomu
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posted 16-12-2004 05:48 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Cloud:
oh yeah? I swear on my heart that I am 10 years old and I drew THIS:
aww !@#$!! I cant get the damn hyperlink to work!

I should create an FAQ for this (not that anyone would read it first).

Getting image from your hard disk to the internet is important. Posting images on the web is something any internet user should learn to do within a month of learning a computer!

Step 1, Research: I.e Type "how to post images on the web" in a search engine etc.

Step 2, I wouldn't usually recommend it, but check out an art database like www.devianart.com (use hyperlinks only). You can easily upload your stuff to their servers providing you follow their rules and guidelines etc.

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Cloud
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posted 27-12-2004 03:53 AM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hehe! I love doing that! putting up a message and saying the hyperlink doesn't work then ben puts a message up saying you have to know how to post images than i edit my post and put in the picture and it looks like ben's a maniac. no offence , oh mighty master .

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Bomu
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posted 29-12-2004 03:41 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
- Heh, no probs Cloud. Just glad you could figure it out.

As I say, better stick to hyperlinks only if linking from Devianart or they'll chuck you out for outside linking, which is against their rules.

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Cloud
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posted 29-12-2004 04:24 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ookey-dokey!
(should i have edited my last post 4 that? if yes, delete this. okay, oh mighty master bomu?and yes I'll stop calling u that)

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Erock
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posted 29-12-2004 09:28 PM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i would say that pic is very good just keep on trying over and over and you'll see you will become a ture master artist nice work!
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Cloud
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posted 29-12-2004 11:35 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
erock, do u draw reasonably?

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Erock
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posted 30-12-2004 01:03 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yea i think i draw pretty good but making characters is my ture power the only reason i draw is because i want to see what my character looks like but now that i've been doing it alot i really like it.

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Cloud
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posted 30-12-2004 04:31 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I sorta just draw because I can sit drool over hot girls on paper (if thier good drawings)
and even sometimes they ACTUALLY have thier clothes on! *gasp*
but seriosly I am a pretty awesome anime artist. I'm actually seriosly (not to brag or anything... ) the best artist in my school out of 500 kids grade 2-8!

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Xion
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posted 11-01-2005 12:41 AM     Profile for Xion   Email Xion     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Im not exactly sure how to clean up the drawing without something as cool as photoshop(s)

But...I also think that it is really cool that people are learning about the anime styles and what they want to do with their lives. I have changed my path and, I am now going into the Computer Info syestem calss at my class. So i will be able to make anamations, and be paid for making websites.
But i have a question is this capable of being edited in a program. And how can i make it apear smaller on the fourm?




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Tri_kento
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posted 11-01-2005 03:55 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
mmm...neat drawing, tho i would suggest working on portions(feet,hint hint). Also figuring out how to clean ur drawins could helo out alot!

none the less good going

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Xion
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posted 18-01-2005 01:07 AM     Profile for Xion   Email Xion     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Im trying to figure out how to fix my drwings up... but it isn't turing out so well ( as you can see)

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