posted 28-12-2004 09:16 PM
Heres another pic of my character for void with bio. I'm pretty sure me and jats1 are going all the way with the void comic thing. Rock on!
Bio: ---- In the near future Nasa aims at setting the first men on mars. Three astronauts are selected for this monumental event in history they are Carol Nelson, Veronica Mullins and Fred Deitemeyer. All three will be expected to walk and roam the red planet. After their journey they safely land on the new world. After they land they begin collecting rocks and performing scientific experiments. During that first day or exploring Carol suddenly began to scream at the top of his lungs. Everyone rushed over to help and they found him shaking on the soil inside his space suite. It looked as if ants covered him from head to toe. Then everyone else started screaming something was on them and eating them alive. It was a strange bacterium that inhabited the planet it was very unique and mysterious in its sort. In a panic Fred took off his space helmet and tried to scrape the unknown substance off him. Then he tried to help his crew mates but unfortunately it was too late the bacteria already took their lives. Slowly Fred began to run out of breath still being attacked himself he head for his space capsule. Once he made it inside he set the coordinates for his return trip for Earth and set the auto polite on. At this point the bacteria had taken over is mind and he’s gone totally wacko. During his 11 month return trip his body began to change. First his whole body blistered and formed some type of fluid filled cocoon. Then as his body hibernated the bacteria adhered its self directly to Fred’s skin. The space craft then entered Earths atmosphere traveling at supersonic speed and crash lands in void city. Where the beast awakens from a coma like state seeking revenge upon who did this to him. Even though no one really did this to him he will never stop looking for the culprit. Fred also has a wife named Patty and a 13 year old son named Chris. They believe Fred died on his mission but what they don't know is that Fred carefully watches over them to prevent them from any harm. Fred believes his family will reject him so he hides never planning to show himself.
SPECIAL POWERS: ------------------------- His bacterial suit can breathe CO2 Super strength and agility He has the power of corrosion; he can corrode any metal into rust Special power called “crystallize” this power makes his suit harden like rock
WEAKNESSES: -------------------- Extreme heat
INFO: ------- Weight: 270 lbs Height: 7’11” Eyes: (under suit) brown Hair: (under suit) brown Age: 35 Sex: Male Country: USA Full Name: Fred C. Deitemeyer
Cloud
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posted 01-01-2005 05:09 PM
hehe, I have to admit, it's pretty cool
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Jats1
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posted 04-01-2005 10:27 AM
Looking pretty good, Maybe you should do a bit of a redraw with cleaner lines though, I had a look on the site and most entries seem to be pretty neat, and as some1 said earlier he looks like daredevil but Im sure that doesn't matter too much. Im about halfway through my lose pose, I made the mistake of drawing a big pile of rubble and its taking me ages to cg it lol.
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posted 06-01-2005 12:27 PM
not bad erock. I like the mount olympus mons font. Finally completed my lose pose. the colour scheme is a bit 'experimental' and I had a tough time with perspective but it more or less makes sense I think.
*edit* dammit the fonts are different sizes lol
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Tri_kento
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posted 07-01-2005 04:22 AM
hehe cool Jats, o and the dare devil guy is cool to.
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Erock
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posted 08-01-2005 08:56 AM
Yea Jats1 that lose pic is too sweet!
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Erock
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posted 13-01-2005 10:39 PM
Here is my 2 page intro
posted 20-01-2005 03:36 PM
Jats dude my character got declined!! They said i need to make my lines cleaner and the dialoge more readable , dude i know you have been telling me that all the time this but thats just the way i like my drawings and my intro kinda sucked but man i had to get it done. well im going to draw it over and get in void. DAMN IT Dude!!!!!!!!!
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Jats1
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posted 20-01-2005 05:03 PM
Aww Im sorry to hear that. if they refuse mine Im gonna call it quits I think, or start up my own pretend comic city lol.
The advice I would give before redrawing is do some practice drawing real anatomy and perspective drawings, and then apply it to more comicy stuff, it will radically improve your art. As for the lines, just draw them in pencil - mine look just like that when im sketching the outline - and then go over them in ink smoothly with no scribbles. also I would recommend doing diaglogue boxes and coluring in photoshop, as it gives your pictures a more professional appearance. Hope this helps
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Erock
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posted 23-01-2005 09:25 PM
here is a back pose of Fred
you know this pic actually scares me a little but its not sopposed to be like the devil or something hes actually named from my great granddad who died recently