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Cloud
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posted 30-01-2005 02:35 AM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I just figured out that you can direct link from geocities!! o, here's the reson of the topic:



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Cloud
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posted 30-01-2005 02:37 AM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I know it really sucks just try to remember i'm 10 and it will work better

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Erock
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posted 30-01-2005 06:52 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i like your use of colors in the pic it really brings it to live
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Jats1
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posted 02-02-2005 12:14 AM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Could be improved with neater lines and colouring within the lines. Also if your cell shading it might be better if you used the polygon lasso tool and fill tool to add the highlight and shadows. I havent cell shaded anything in so long that my only example is one of the first pictures I ever cg'ed - and its one of bomu's! Anyway, This might at least illustrate my point, though my colouring isn't good enough at this stage to be called an 'example'. Incidentally, cell shading those pipes was one of the activities the persuaded me brushes were the way to go!

Bomu's cyber nurse

some of the edges are a bit jagged but that can be improved with the smudge tool.

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Jats1
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posted 02-02-2005 12:36 AM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
some1 on deviant art apparently failed to understand I didn't do the lineart, so I feel it is only fair a transfer his comment here for bomu's ego:

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holy fuck!
please tell me how you smoothen this to the quality it is now!
I mean, how do you get the lineart so tight?
but anyway...
after seeing this I know I've got some work in progress to do


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Tri_kento
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posted 02-02-2005 12:54 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Jats i like the CG job good one !

o and cloud, keep at it. I was 13 when i really started focesing on art, so no worries, you'll get there !

I'd suggest work on lines, and coloring in the lines, o and if ur going to shade i find setting the flow of the air brush to 10% gives it a nice look! i think bomu had that in his tutorial ? haven't read it 4 awhile hehe!.

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Cloud
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posted 02-02-2005 02:02 AM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yes well I drew it in early 2004 so now m drawing skillz have REALLY improved ( I don't even now why I posted that stupid art i just wanted to see a thread fill up)

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Erock
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posted 02-02-2005 03:48 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Wow! Jats you drew that nurse pic!!!!!!
lol just kidding. Wow nice job!
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Schizotom
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posted 09-02-2005 12:20 AM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
whats good is that its a loose style which means you will have flare when you refine your art and will be able to bend the rules of perspective and add your own orriginality to your art.

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