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Schizotom
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posted 02-03-2005 06:12 PM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
right this aint my lineart at all but the colourin is all mine so don't crit on lineart just on colour:http://www.deviantart.com/view/15690379/

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Jats1
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posted 02-03-2005 06:19 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
nice! i see a lot of improvement. I think the hair is particularly good. The skin looks a little yellow/green for my taste - maybe do a quick experiment in the colour balance section, try adding some reds perhaps. Also it might be useful to start experimenting with highlights and shadows that aren't deeper/lighter shades of the midtone colour.

Great job though. I like the lineart you picked too. Kepp up the good work

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Tri_kento
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posted 02-03-2005 10:17 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nice job on the Cg good color choices! I wish i had my laptop already so i could use photo shop agian. T-T but neh, great work.

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Webb
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posted 02-03-2005 11:19 PM     Profile for Webb   Email Webb     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Really nice i like it

Really like the hair and i agree with Jats anout the skin colour being a bit yellow, if you intended it to be that yellow then okay but it could be that your monitor is displaying colours slightly differently to ours and hence we see different colours/shades to what you intend(its a possability) unfortunatly there is no way to find out that one unless you have a couple of monitors

EDIT - Oh and perhaps addind a bit of shading to the cherry blossom in the background would add a little more to the final piece

[ 02-03-2005: Message edited by: Webb ]

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Angelo
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posted 03-03-2005 01:27 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey dude, I really liked the colouring on this piece, it shows one helluva progression from your colouring before. I don't think the skin's too bad, maybe add a little desaturated pink or something, that might help it a little. Aside from that, it's ace!

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