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Xion
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posted 09-03-2005 06:47 PM     Profile for Xion   Email Xion     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This is my first c.g. art. I wish to know what to do other then clean it up even more...



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Jats1
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posted 09-03-2005 07:28 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Looks pretty good. it hard to see the details cos its so small. One bit of advice I could offer though is to shade white stuff with light blue rather than grey it should look nicer.

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Tri_kento
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posted 10-03-2005 12:08 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
mm good job 4 ur first CG, Be nice if the pic was a little bigger tho. but neh still good none the less eh!. if anything i'd say try to give the snow boarder some diffrent colors so he stands out more , and isn't blended in with the back ground.

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posted 10-03-2005 01:28 AM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool! I would suggest making the lines cleaner by putting white over them before you color... just my oppinion ^^

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flashdragoon
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posted 10-03-2005 01:51 AM     Profile for flashdragoon   Author's Homepage   Email flashdragoon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
it's pretty good, I agree with jats, use colors like blue rather than gray to shade white, stay away from teh burn and dodge tool especially when you are just starting out, they can be decieving! hehe, anyways, great for your first!!!!

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Camdon
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posted 11-03-2005 11:40 PM     Profile for Camdon   Author's Homepage   Email Camdon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
no offense, but where is his left arm?? I think you need brighter colors too. Better than anything I could do. Is it completely computer-generated?

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