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Camdon
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posted 12-03-2005 08:38 PM     Profile for Camdon   Author's Homepage   Email Camdon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
this is my first pencil of anything other than a head, what do you think? I know i forgot the other end of the lance!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/Camdon/Dragoon.jpg

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Tri_kento
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posted 13-03-2005 01:38 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
mmm a little blah.. but still good work tho y is is sword comeing out ? does he magical mind powers to do so? or could he not afford a larger sword sheath? hehe. i'd say work on lines a little more they seem a little squwirmish.

also u might wanna add a little more depth into your guy, he seems pretty flat,2d exe....

nice go tho, keep it up!

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Camdon
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posted 14-03-2005 12:28 PM     Profile for Camdon   Author's Homepage   Email Camdon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Yea i noticed all these little things...

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Jats1
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posted 15-03-2005 07:22 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Try going over bits in a thicker pencil - like his arm, his torso, his head, his skull shoulder pad etc. Line width variation can make a lot of difference to whether or not a picture looks flat.

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Erock
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posted 16-03-2005 09:17 PM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i say make it look 3d ish and add like texture and fell to the pic also if your going to have a skull make it really evil looking
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Schizotom
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posted 01-04-2005 11:01 AM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hmmm yes i agree i think that the shoulder pads look more evil than the ace lol but yeah if you transfer the qualities of the shoulder pad to his face you will have a good picture. also where youve placed the six pac looks a bit wonky, and instead of drawing it in I think it would look better if you'd lightly pencilled them in and made it more 3d looking by shading and highlighting.

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