Topic: bullshit i forgot the bus again coz my massive tits weighed me down.
Schizotom
Mega Member
Member # 291
posted 24-03-2005 09:45 AM
yeah this woman is a stupid cunt and my second proper attempt at my graphics tablet lo tried a wierd effect with the smudge tool and yeah it looks so so but shit i want to get better now ah well:http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/16448212/
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Angelo
Extreme Member
Member # 134
posted 24-03-2005 11:34 AM
Hey there, the colouring again rules in this, only things I'd say is to blend the shading on the suitcase and coat a little better, but I'm liking this. The face is done fairly nicely as well.
posted 29-03-2005 05:03 PM
I like it too. the smudge aeffect kind of makes it look like you used textured brushes of some sort. Personally though im not a fan of mouths that are almost bigger than the face - I know it happens quite alot in manga but hey.
In terms of crits, I'd say the way her hair is flowing could be made more realistic to convey the idea of motion, also I think there are some anatomy issues with the knee area of her right leg.
Pretty good altogether though, I think there is noticable improvement between your newer and older pictures. Keep it up
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Schizotom
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Member # 291
posted 30-03-2005 09:04 PM
thanks jats lol more crits
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