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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 31-03-2005 01:45 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/16708021/ - my first drawing for a while, and another opportunity to practice my new style (or evolved, I dunno, I guess I gotta decide about that at some point). Anyway, enjoy, I do know that the girl's right arm isn't meant to be obscured, but I had no idea how to draw it correctly without it looking wrong. Suggestions to this would be good. Also set up a poll for her facial style.

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 31-03-2005 03:55 PM

looking like an improvement to me, but im in a rush so I can't form any useful crits at the moment, im gonna come back when I have some thing intelligent (hah!) to say

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 31-03-2005 04:48 PM

Angelo,

Looking good

Hmmm my initial thought when i looked at it was the pose wasnt quite natural enough but i couldnt put my finger on it then it came to me in a flash its one of two things,

1. She is standing perpendicular to the man so she needs to be move to the right a bit and the man's body turned slightly to the right as well, the missing arm could then be wrapped around the mans waist.

2. She has been grapped from the side so her arm will just sort of be dangling down between her and him not doing anything or you could bring it across her own stomach perhaps though that could make her look a little bit protective of herself and remove some of the caring element from the piece.

Hope it made sense and was helpful

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Si13Nt
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Member # 221

posted 31-03-2005 08:49 PM

all i see is some crap about devian tart

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 31-03-2005 09:55 PM

Silent, at the bottom of the page is a button saying return to Deviant Art or something similar click it and as if by magic the picture will appear!

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Schizotom
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Member # 291

posted 31-03-2005 10:08 PM

hey yeah its good but the anatomy needs a bit of work ie the mans breasts are like half suacers lol but yeah good pose i dont know whats wrong with the arm seems fine to me lol.

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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 31-03-2005 10:22 PM

Ive had a look, and the anatomy of the breasts could use work as shiz said, and her hand looks a bit like a claw. The breasts should be kind of pushed together a bit maybe, and at the moment they both look like theyre being viewed from head on. I think her eyes could be done differently, as her top and bottom eyelids are represented as parallel bars. perhaps tilting them upwards at the outer corners would make her more alluring. also her nose should have the smallest indication of nostrils, and perhaps be slightly upturned to make her cuter, at the moment its too long and thin. larger lips could make her more feminine also. This chap seems to know what hes doing:
http://www.kaiserstudio.net/bryan/dpcontest2.jpg

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 31-03-2005 10:28 PM

Cheers for the pics, Jats, I might be redoing this picture and inking it later. Those will come in useful for that.

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AKATT
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Member # 38

posted 06-04-2005 02:07 AM

Hey dude how you doing? haven't got anything to add than what everyone's already said but i must say your work's hell of alot improved since i was last here - good on ya!

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 06-04-2005 10:31 AM

Yeah I'm ok mate, I ain't seen yourself on here for a while, what you been up to? Anyway, start posting more of your stuff, it's been a while since we saw any of yours!

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