posted 31-03-2005 11:34 PM
well i will start by saying i put this thread here and not in bomus okaeaki rough sketches etc because i am hpoing to recieve some really helpful crit and not just a quick skim if thats ok.
yeah this is my set of realistic faces the curly haired one is my bro the long haired dude is some evil cunt and the other two are ripped from hogarths book which i'm happy with: knowing my luck the pic won't show up so you have the link too http://www.deviantart.com/view/16722605/
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-------------------- woot i can write shit in here i am well proud.
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Angelo
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posted 01-04-2005 11:56 AM
Liking these, the old guy in the bottom left is my fave. Bottom right I have a few issues with, it looks like he's kinda made out of jelly, so the body looks slightly flaccid. Make the lines for the muscles a little more rigid, so they look stronger. Aside from this, the faces look really awesome, keep up the good work mate.
posted 06-04-2005 01:57 AM
i like the old dude and the guy in the bottom left. They seem more stylised than realistic thom as if the features are a bit too slightly exagerated.
posted 14-04-2005 09:38 PM
I'd definaly say stylised rather than realistic too. People with manga habits continue drawing oversized eyes for quite a while, it's a bad habit! Eyes should be in the middle of the head also, so those two things can quickly change the way the picture is percieved.
The bottom right one is tricky. A good indication on the back is the curve of the spine. I think I would worry about getting the frame right of a figure then as you get more experienced work out muscle and bone placements. The human body is vastly complicated after all
I also like the bottom left one, I think because the hair has some volume and you spent some time getting the light right on it, he has hunched shoulders, looks kinda suspicious with an interesting personality!
posted 22-04-2005 04:49 PM
the faces are quite nice! I especially love the way you did the lips and noses. its a more 'realistic' style but you can definately incorporate them into a manga!