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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 13-07-2005 01:57 AM

Another unoriginal posing chick

I was pissed with the quality of my linearts so I spent a while on this one in photoshop...it was gonna just be a quick chick pic for the speedpaint thread, but I got carried away and went way over the hour limit.

let me know what you think!

I think I may use this as a sketch for a digital painting, so im not gonna use this as a lineart for a cg or anything...feel free to have a crack at cging if anyone wants. here's a hi-res one: http://img318.echo.cx/img318/6369/hotness2copy6fv.jpg
*edit* in fact if your gonna do that, tell me first cos I need to fix some things.

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Dekar
Grand Member

Member # 122

posted 13-07-2005 06:46 AM

Looks good overall.. I just can't put my finger on a few things..

Not sure, what you intended to change already but right off I see the hair is just off here. It seems like she was doing a turn and flicks her hips or something.. I can understand why her hair would be that far flown over, just that you should remove the hair on the right from going off so far, cut it down some instead of it going off the shoulder, or just make the hair on that side run down her neck some and down. But, there is a slight possibility their is some sort of photo shot fan blowing at her!

Other than that, I think her blouse is a bit too stiff it seems rather smooth non-tight on the top but not seeing much ben/curves folds to show it. I believe you can do it with coloring, I'd just think a few more would be a plus possibly.

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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 13-07-2005 10:48 AM

yeah the hair is a bit of a mess, one thing that didn't work with it is the single line strands of hair I tried to do. If anyone tells me they want to cg it it Ill fix it, but if I do any colouring itll be without the lineart anyway so it wouldn't be worth it.

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 13-07-2005 04:03 PM

Nice work dude. Very clean and slick lookin'

Nit pick 1: I'd make the outter nostril line thinner. For some reason it don't detract too much, but usually putting that line in makes the nose look a little fat.

Nit pick 2: I think she could do with her hair line lowered just a tad

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