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Jats1
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posted 26-07-2005 11:46 AM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
erhm, haven't really thought of a name for it yet. Ive got the whole intro chapter planned now, but haven't drawn it all out yet here is the char sheet for the main char, though the middle one and the bottom middle one are gonna have to be redone.

and here is page 3 which is where I started for some reason lol

I just wanted to see what people think. next time I update itll be the whole intro chapter in the right order...and hopefully Ill have a name for it by then.

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Cloud
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posted 26-07-2005 04:19 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
That's awesome! The only thing I would have to point out is in the first panel, the guy's mouth is a bit oddly oval-shaped. Thats all though.

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Tri_kento
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posted 26-07-2005 11:47 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
wow another comic, jat's u seem to really want to give a go at this comic thing!

might i suggest tho, that u get some pics of people wearing gees(sp?)(martial arts training clouths) since some od the folds in the clouthing is rather none functionall looking... to be blunt.


so yea. u should color it i want to see it done up fancy style

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Erock
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posted 27-07-2005 05:40 PM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Badass! See i knew you could do it Jats. So far so good cant wait till the story unfolds and is it going to be like fire ball, street fighter type style fighting?
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evilone
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posted 28-07-2005 06:08 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i think thats really cool

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