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Schizotom
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posted 31-07-2005 09:12 PM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well although it aint finished i thought it would be nice an easy to put it in finished works and then post the finished peie on this thread therefore only one thread is used.

anyhoo crits plz if yall think its good then i'll try and do a much better version so just speak your minds

http://www.deviantart.com/view/21209548/

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evilone
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posted 01-08-2005 12:29 AM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i dont understand What the heck is going on!!!? i dont understand wat they are doing or what the "scene" is?

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Schizotom
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posted 01-08-2005 11:06 AM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
oh sorry i'll explain lol. right basicaly there is a woman on the left the crazy one with googles yeah? right well next to her on the right is an arm pointing a gun at an escaping criminal the whole pic is like you looking through the gun pointers eyes. on the right is the teenager that the other two picked up he's smoking a fag. the background consists of hills going towards the horizon. on the right is going to be a tree and there are some steps going up the mountain.

yes i'll agree its pretty pathetic but its only a doodle to see if its worth following up for a real peice

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Erock
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posted 01-08-2005 07:28 PM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool looking art man.
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evilone
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posted 02-08-2005 09:36 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ya its ok its just so confusing

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Schizotom
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posted 02-08-2005 10:37 PM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well heres the final peice plz crit if you want a full description go to deviant via the link

http://www.deviantart.com/view/21291326/


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Angelo
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posted 03-08-2005 12:49 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey, you know my opinions, so I'll be quick. The colouring is quite interesting, it's not like a lot of other stuff I see. Only problem really is some of the pencil line not being cleaned up, but I think it adds to the craziness of the picture.

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posted 04-08-2005 06:18 PM     Profile for evilone   Author's Homepage   Email evilone     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
what he said! the only thing i dont like is the nose but hey thats just me!

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