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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 04-08-2005 08:11 PM

well i finished it and colored and everything i wanted to do a backround but no such luck (i hate backrounds!!!!)
a few minutes later...
this is her with a backround:

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 04-08-2005 10:30 PM

evil, a little hint, putting lens flares in ur pics does not improve it all the time.... i would suggest working on ur drawings before u start getting into CGing ur assasin seems a little sketchy. and it might help "If u worko n ur lines" (god do i ever repeat my self

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but show any who!

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evilone
Extreme Member

Member # 347

posted 04-08-2005 10:38 PM

this wasn't lens flare it was paintbrush but the transparencey was like 50%

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Si13Nt
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Member # 221

posted 04-08-2005 10:46 PM

still looks a bit rubbish, whats the point of it being there?

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 04-08-2005 10:54 PM

cause the light of the outdoors is coming into the room while she's sniping out ppl i guess i should just keep to the non-backround pic.

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 05-08-2005 02:32 PM

Not a bad effort overall. As for the background, it could definetly use some details- tables, plants, pictures hanging on walls and other props.

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KaiserD
Member

Member # 319

posted 05-08-2005 08:40 PM

That's not a paintbrush, least all of it. It's too smooth! (edit: Take that back, could be a large brush I guess)

With your anatomy, study the relationship between the head and the shoulders. It doesn't look natural, and of course causes problems with your arms.

Practice using colours by hand before using dodge or screen effects for your highlights, it will develop your understanding of colour and light. Someone posted a faaantastic colouring tutorial on here before...

I like your choice of skin colour, most people do it too orange. I like the character herself too, it was an interesting subject and not ye olde school girl pose which I am so so fed up of seeing. Twas a good effort.

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