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evilone
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posted 06-08-2005 02:54 AM

so here it is say all u want i know its terrible

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KaiserD
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posted 06-08-2005 09:36 AM

you still need a line to help align your drawings, many of them are lopsided.

It's cute though!

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evilone
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posted 06-08-2005 04:32 PM

fine GOSH! i rotated it

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Erock
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posted 06-08-2005 05:36 PM

nice i like it, it think you put just a little more detail into it like add some highlights to the hair and eyes. Also draw that right line to finish her right shoulder and shade her neck more and maybe add some neck lines.

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KaiserD
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posted 06-08-2005 08:06 PM

Flipping a picture is not going to help you. If you don't address the problem, it isn't going to fix itself. Just keep it in mind in the future.

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evilone
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posted 06-08-2005 09:02 PM

ya i know the hair is bad but i didnt really work on the neck all that much i just focused on the head.

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KaiserD
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posted 06-08-2005 09:14 PM

It wasn't really the hair I was meaning it was the face. Have you ever seen Jullie Dillon's tutorials?

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evilone
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posted 06-08-2005 10:43 PM

wait yes i have in the howtodrawmangasite? it really helped me with folds!

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KaiserD
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posted 06-08-2005 11:45 PM

That's the one, I found her head drawing ones really useful. Mind you couldn't draw circles or ovals if my life depended on it...

but it's easier to get started and alligning eyes and things.

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Funkenstein
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posted 07-08-2005 01:15 AM

when colouring, always use a more saturated shadow colour, and never use the burn tool in photoshop. This is especially obvious on skintones, and If your darker tones are too desaturated they will look like mud or facial hair.

hope that helped a little.
~Dr.Funkenstein~

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evilone
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posted 07-08-2005 02:20 AM

uh dude i did that with skin tones i used different tones

IN a blended fashion.

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Si13Nt
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posted 07-08-2005 02:55 AM

he said more saturated shade of the base colour, we can see u used different tones, its just it looks like shes trying to grow a beard...

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Funkenstein
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posted 09-08-2005 01:29 AM

Okay, perhaps I didn't explain myself properly. What i'm talking about is raising the saturation of your darker colours. Tone is the movement of colour between light and dark, whereas saturation is the movement of colour between strong and weak. Without a big enough difference between the saturation of your darker tones and that of your highlights your image will turn muddy. With better saturation difference your colour can become much more vibrant and illustrate a 3d shape better.

Sorry if my original post was confusing.
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evilone
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posted 09-08-2005 02:42 AM

whats with the freckles?!

plus i think that looks like:
A. either she's in a lot of shade.
B. she's reddened in the face from anger and other things

C.its ok but i dont really care for that kind but thanks for the tip i'll try an imbetween

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Erock
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posted 09-08-2005 09:51 AM

i think she looks hottttt!!!

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Jats1
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posted 09-08-2005 11:36 AM

I think you should listen to Dr Funkenstein

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Si13Nt
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posted 09-08-2005 02:39 PM

the hair highlights look wicked

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oneofthosenames
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posted 14-08-2005 03:24 PM

i've noticed some of your artwork, like they said, the key is practice, practice, practice. you can be good on colours, i like the way you did the eyes for you pictures in way of colours. but mind the form though, dont you think its too "manga"

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Schizotom
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posted 08-09-2005 09:38 PM

lmao evilone you were just rude to funkenstein.

funkenstein being probably the best artist on this site you muppet.

when he says colours should stay saturated and not become muddy he means when you go on the colour picker don't just go downwards and make the skin darker he means make it more deeper and richer and just a tad darker.

also i would say that skin ussualy goes a quite blue colour when in shade but meh i am trippy tom.

funkenstein: waaah no to the freckles thats some bad ass stuff.

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