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Bomu
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posted 22-09-2005 01:39 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This should probably go in the quick art thread, but I wanted to know if anyone had any preferences on these 3 colour versions? Also, any comments on the style? Wanted to try out some big eye / small mouth stuff.



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Webb
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posted 22-09-2005 03:36 PM     Profile for Webb   Email Webb     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Bomu,

Liking them but the blue one looks a bit washed out, if you get what I mean. The Big eyes small mouth thing isnt really working for me perhaps the eyes are just too big! Hmmm or maybe its just the left eye (thats our left) perhaps a little bit too much "white" on the bottom left.

Back to the question you asked though i like the first two best! if i had to choose betweeen them i would probably go for the greyscale.

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posted 22-09-2005 04:10 PM     Profile for Funkenstein   Author's Homepage   Email Funkenstein     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
NIce!

Personally, I hate big eye, small mouth style. I mean, Is that a nose or an unfourtunate blemish? However that's just me.
I preffer the black and white one, but i'd make the lips darker, so she looks a little more femme fatale. She could also do with a little reflected light, (or cold secondary light) on the side of her chin.
very groovy

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Schizotom
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posted 22-09-2005 05:36 PM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i like the blue one best.
i dont like the eyes bomu i think they are to wide and like an alien.
so yeah whats all this malarky about cold sceondary lights? explain please

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Funkenstein
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posted 22-09-2005 06:17 PM     Profile for Funkenstein   Author's Homepage   Email Funkenstein     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
a thin sliver of light on the opposite side from the main light source. "cold" refering to the hue of the colour, since the light hitting her face is quite warm.
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Bomu
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posted 22-09-2005 08:54 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cheers v. much for the comments guys. I always manage to fail at a decent 'BESM' style, so should probably stick to something less stylized.. or just learn to do it properly!

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posted 22-09-2005 09:53 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Funkenstein:
NIce!

Personally, I hate big eye, small mouth style. I mean, Is that a nose or an unfourtunate blemish?

~Dr.Funknestein~


i laughed at that...loads ... heeheehee

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posted 23-09-2005 10:08 AM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool pictures, I like the top one best myself. I think you made her look to mature for that style though, with the full lips and eye shadow.

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posted 23-09-2005 01:36 PM     Profile for Funkenstein   Author's Homepage   Email Funkenstein     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
i laughed at that...loads ... heeheehee

well, I didn't mean to be rude, but hey, we all know Mr. Bomu can draw a nose when he wants to. It's just a style thing.
I totally agree with Zankouken! That's a really good point. Are big eye manga characters ever anything but really young girls?
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