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TK
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posted 04-10-2005 12:16 AM

this is the first time ive ever tried drawing manga so would be cool to see what ppl think thanx alot for all the help i got there in the end lol

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Cloud
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posted 04-10-2005 02:18 AM

Try hosting the pic on photobucket.com

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Webb
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posted 04-10-2005 10:20 AM

TK,

You need to host the picture on the web not on your PC now you can do as cloud suggests and use photobucket or i use imageshack which is good with unlimited space.

Imageshack <-Link

Easy to upload pictures just follow the instructions i would register first its free and helps you keep track of things.

Hope this helps once you get it up on the web link it in your post as an edit and i will post up some comments!

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TK
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posted 04-10-2005 06:55 PM

i got it on there finaly thanks for the help cloud and webb

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Cloud
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posted 04-10-2005 11:07 PM

that's cool... i see you copied cloud's (the real one) pic

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TK
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posted 05-10-2005 10:45 AM

i dont get what you mean i copied what?

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Cloud
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posted 06-10-2005 02:21 AM

copied dan fielding's pic, in the back of ben's book.

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Tri_kento
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posted 06-10-2005 02:26 AM

But at least it wasn't a trace, and at least it's a slightly diffrent pose. the angle is diffrent.(i think that stops it from being a tech copy but... what ever)

CG skills could use a little tweaking
uhmmm lines need to be smoother and face looks a little crook shanked to me.

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TK
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posted 06-10-2005 09:59 AM

tis k i did sort of copy the general idea but i needed an idea to practise with since id never tried anything like this before

yeah its alittle rushed i think i will go over it again an make the lines more pronounced an if i can ill ajust the face

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Zankouken
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posted 06-10-2005 03:17 PM

Its good, but I dont think you should have added the white outline and that the special effects on the guns spoil it. Another thing that I noticed is that the guns are shooting but it doesn't look like her index fingers are on the triggers.

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Tri_kento
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posted 06-10-2005 08:06 PM

you might want to change the background. it seems to blend the person in and take away from her. well in my opnion.

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TK
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posted 06-10-2005 08:31 PM

whoa appreciate the proper critisisms guys lol all my friends jus go wow an drool over anything i draw gets quite anoying

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strat3
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posted 06-10-2005 10:04 PM

ohh yeah cloud, i was lookn through the book, and saw your credits on the two pics... there cool ASS!!! really good, heh, i didnt know you did them, + what age are you?
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD???

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Tri_kento
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posted 06-10-2005 10:39 PM

wrong cloud, that's a way diffrent guy

are cloud ain't nearly that good HAHA

no offense could but it is true

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Cloud
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posted 07-10-2005 04:19 PM

yeah nobody on this board is that good. cept Bomu

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posted 07-10-2005 07:44 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Cloud:
yeah nobody on this board is that good. cept silent

thanks buddy

>_>

<_<

what?

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strat3
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posted 07-10-2005 08:44 PM

so your kinda porposly missguiding people? heh

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Cloud
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posted 07-10-2005 09:20 PM

don't talk to your elders like that, noob

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posted 07-10-2005 10:44 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Cloud:
respect silent, noob

you love me today huh

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Cloud
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posted 08-10-2005 12:14 AM

ok, your getting on my nerves

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TK
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posted 08-10-2005 12:36 AM

lol a little off topic dont you think!!!

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evilone
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posted 08-10-2005 01:51 AM

dude this CANT be your first one you obviously seem too familier with the shading and special effects.

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Cloud
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posted 08-10-2005 04:35 PM

nah man... there's like no shading on that pic... if you look closely there's a bit but it's all mixed up... personally i think: good lines, bad CG, bad folds, good for first pic. I tried to draw that and her eyes came out looking like a disabled person.

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strat3
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posted 08-10-2005 08:03 PM

elder, ha

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posted 08-10-2005 09:45 PM

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