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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 25-10-2005 10:47 AM

Well what can I say, havent done much latly, actually I think thats the first thing I completed after the expose yourself contest.

Anyways too much bollywood movies lately made me do something more colorfull. face came out more realistical then I had it intended too.

But I like how the hands and feets turned out sure they are far from perfect but still better then what I pull out usualy.

Bigger version

[ 25-10-2005: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 25-10-2005 12:56 PM

Damn, you ain't kidding, it has been a while. I like the transparency effects in this, they're done quite nicely. Only thing that's bothering me is her right foot, the angle seems a bit messed up, particularly for the way she's facing. I'd say to probably make it face centre a bit more. Aside from that, nice work. Hope to see more from you

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Zankouken
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Member # 203

posted 25-10-2005 06:14 PM

Nice Giam. Like Angelo said the dagin effects are cool but I think the clouds behind her look good aswell. The only problem I have with her feet though is that it looks like her big toes are on the outside of her feet.

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 25-10-2005 07:02 PM

omg your right, I actualy did draw the toes in the wrong order. damn how could that slip quality control.

öhm I better fix that up I guess thats just a way too big mistake to leave it in.

...and fixed^^.

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Zankouken
Grand Member

Member # 203

posted 26-10-2005 07:36 AM

Haha I do it myself all the time, even thumbs do not escape my wrath of wrongness.

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 26-10-2005 02:35 PM

I thought someone had been digging up old posts again when I saw a thread by Giam at the top of the list!
Picture looks great and I cant find anything major to critisise. Glad to see you artistic skills havn't shrivelled up since your last work

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Erock
Extreme Member

Member # 189

posted 27-10-2005 12:53 AM

*old post* hahhaha just kidding like the pose, like the colors, love the fabric on the cloths, hand and feet are badass. nice to see you on the board latley.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 28-10-2005 07:57 AM

Nice drawing! the CG is cool to.

For crits... i'd like to see a little more detail. not that i think that drawing's bland. just i'd like a little more to the character.

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 29-10-2005 06:03 PM

nice one

keep up the good work!

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spencer macpherson
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Member # 358

posted 10-11-2005 01:40 AM

hehehe whenever i click on a link and a pic is bigger then my screen it sizes it down to fit my screen. befor i forget, alsome pic

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Dekar
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Member # 122

posted 13-11-2005 11:06 PM

Good to see a Moderator submitting again.

Nice, yeah the face does look a bit on the realistic end good placed lines. I'm not certain if I agree with the colors you picked I think some would look better like grey/silver the red/blue with orange accents a bit different.

Nice fix up the foot there, yeah it was a bit turned. But, I think it might've actually been fine if you changed the shadows on the sash/skirt below. It just looks to me like you originally planned it to be concaved there as the folds going inward/back at the waist rather than outward on the left. Hmm, it's just if you look at the leg and look at the shadow then the feet it just doesn't flow well as it should to me. Maybe it was wrong to turn the foot after all?

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